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Jump by l.raven

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I'm always impressed when members take on these small syllable-count poems. I love the image that accompanies this.
As far as the poem goes, the meaning is simply stated. The "thump" is a great auditory finish to the poem.
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 07-Nov-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Demise of Little Mouse by Irish Rain

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I enjoyed this immensely. It's hilarious! So the structure fits the bill for a sonnet. Great rhyme, great rhythm, great musicality in the sound of it. The tone is light and the imagery is vivid. Poor mousey, but they need to stay outside or face the consequences.
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 07-Nov-2016

Concern by rama devi

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I had no clue what a quinzaine was. Thanks for making the attempt and promoting it so capably for the rest of us. The message is clear and simply stated. The accompanying image makes sense. Great job and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 07-Nov-2016

If Time Allowed by rspoet

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This is a well crafted sonnet that hits all the points on the checklist. Great job crafting the rhyme and the rhythm. There's also a musicality to it. The imagery is great in lines like, "secrets are too thorny to unmask".

I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 07-Nov-2016

A man without a vision. by royowen

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All the work that it must have taken to complete this is well deserving of the stars. The only reason I didn't give it the six is because I just couldn't come on board with the comparison of a man without vision and a drifting cloud. I guess I find so much usefulness and beauty in clouds that the simile stuck out like a sore thumb.

But the rhyme and rhythm are fantastic. The other images are profound. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 07-Nov-2016

skittering leaves flee (haiku) by Sis Cat

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I like this. The imagery is great. I get the satori in the last line. It looks at winter's approach from two interconnected yet distinct ways. I love the personification in skittering leaves flee and winter stalking autumn as both reinforce the relationship between the lines
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 07-Nov-2016

Will Willows Weep? by Mystic Angel 7777

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This poem is amazing. The use of w with willows is awesome because the sounds of the words are reminiscent of the wind interacting with trees (willows). I think this is an awesome entry and should do well.
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 28-Sep-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Witchy by BeasPeas
Chapter 27 of the book September Poems 2016

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This is another well-constructed poem. You are almost at the end of the challenge and I have been impressed with the variety of poems you've posted. This must take a great amount of effort. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 28-Sep-2016

A Beacon by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

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Wow. I'm so glad you posted this even though it's past the submission period. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The rhyme and rhythm were great. I could relate to the message and the tone; to the utter desperation to find the way out, and the immense relief when He shows up. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 28-Sep-2016

robru (pregnant wife) by robyn corum

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Thanks for the heads up. That must be a lot of pressure but go for it!!! This poem is great. I don't know that I will be able to review them all, but I will make the effort. This had me chuckling and counting syllables. Love the image .
Comment Written by GabbyLew on 27-Sep-2016


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