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Covert Motivations by AshelinaB
Chapter 16 of the book Want and Resent: Plunge

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While this is not my normal reading genera, I can appreciate your talent as a writer and loved the ease and flow of your writing. You have a style that is both unique and universal, Simply put, I loved it!!! Keep up the good work :)
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

Crime in a suburb. by Marvin Calloway
Chapter 3 of the book Loophole

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I would kill to be able to write dialogues in such an effective way, excellent job!! The overall read flowed smoothly and was easy to read and follow. I'm not the best at grimmer but I didn't notice anything that stood out, wonderful submission :)
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

The Reflection by Sugarray77

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Wow, from someone that loves to look into their lovers eyes, this was quite moving and powerful. I loved the imagery and simplistic way you captured such a profound emotion, excellent job!!!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

Code 4: Error 106 by Cal Amborn

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This is an excellent start to a story, it flows well, captured my interest and the plot ended nicely to draw the reader in. I hope to read more and see how this ends!! Excellent job!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

Trees by Dolly'sPoems

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I loved this poem, especially the "Her roots embed under your shed," This takes me back to my childhood!!! Poetry has a rear quality about it that allows us in few words to capture something profound. You did this perfectly, thank for sharing :)
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

Two Quarts Low by phred
Chapter 2 of the book Newer World Order

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Excellent, excellent writing, while this is not my normal genera, I can appreciate the narration and you wonderful use of dialogues. I envy your style, wonderful submission and thank you for sharing!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

Don't laugh, he said by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 30 of the book Fictional Short Stories

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That's too funny, the exact same thing actually happened to a coworkers son lol. I loved the poem, excellent description and perfect formation!!! I loved the poem and thanks for the memory and laugh :)

Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Jan-2018

The Loved & The Cherished Part 3 by apky
Chapter 52 of the book Golden Shana: The Capture

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Wow!!!! I love your use of dialogue and the ease with which I could read this. You definitely have a talent and I'm looking forward to reading more!! Thank you for sharing:)
Comment Written by tango494 on 27-Dec-2017

Dreams Of Zydeco by easyeverett1

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Excellent poem, I love your style and easy flow method that you emplyeed. I'm honored to be able to review your work and look forward to reading more!!!! Thanks for your submission!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 27-Dec-2017

Forces of Nature [Ending A] by AshelinaB
Chapter 3 of the book Puppy Love and the Storm Above 2A

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Excellent narration, I loved your use of dialogue, I wish I had the same talent. The flow was easy to follow and it was a good read. I'm honored to be able to review and read your work :)
Comment Written by tango494 on 27-Dec-2017


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