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Digital Love Part 10 by Jm4805

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Excellent submission, very well thought out and well worded. I love the easy flow, awesome job!!!!! I would recommend your work to others and I look forward to reading more!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 27-Dec-2017

Kitten / Cat by Sandra du Plessis
Prologue of the book 23. Diamante Poetry

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I've always been a cat lover, not all of them are so friendly but some are just amazing. Thanks for sharing this cut, fun and imaginative poem!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 07-Mar-2016

Lost In The Forest by prettybluebirds

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The fact that people do this on such a regular basis breaks my heart. I've always believed that if you'd mistreat an animal, then you'd probably do the same to a fellow human. Thank you for sharing and bringing this to light. Excellent write!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 07-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Mi Quimera by santanajr66

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Ha sido un tiempo desde que he tenido la oportunidad de escribir en español . Gracias por compartir un poema tan precioso con hermosas imígenes que . Esta fue una lectura preciosa !!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 07-Mar-2016

Return to Paradise by giraffmang

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The concept of the last man on Earth, I like the concept. I think if you chose to, you could easily make a novel of this story. Nice plot and excellent read!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 07-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Lament of Heaven by David Thomas

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Nice flow and imagery in your submission. I liked the imagery that you created through you well crafted alliteration. Great submission.
Comment Written by tango494 on 07-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Dark Shadow/Part Two by scongrove
Chapter 32 of the book Total Chaos

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This is a well crafted story, I find myself reviewing a lot of works that are outside my normal reading material, as this piece is, but I must say it's written well enough that it certainly drew me in. Great Job and I will make an attempt to try and keep up with the story.
Comment Written by tango494 on 07-Mar-2016

The Sounds of Silence by Dean Kuch

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I love how you adapted this song, it's one of my favorites. I've always considered they lyrics to be among the most poetic I've ever heard. Nice job!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Mar-2016

Duty by Sefiros
Chapter 93 of the book Sefiros Eishi: Future's Twilight

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Excellent use of dialogue, and word selection, I love the ease in which I was able to read this. I think you did an amazing job with moving the story along but not neglecting the details. Awesome submission!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Mar-2016

Tranquility by livelylinda

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"no amount would ever fill
that spiritual place
between heart and soul
and what I truly needed
I already had "

This is a very simplistic yet profound statement!!! I loved this poem and how it reminded me of things I'd forgotten in the daily routine of life. Thank you for sharing!!!!
Comment Written by tango494 on 06-Mar-2016


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