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Editors Won't Stop Me by CodyJack

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Hi Cody, I ejoyed reading this piece. I enjoyed the rebellious loose form. As someone else said, I'm not a critique. I'm uncomfortable reviewing. I know what I like though. Kudos. That's one scarey wife!
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 11-Dec-2010

Elements by InterestingRon
Chapter 25 of the book Poetic Laughter

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Bravo! I love it. So tongue in cheek. Nothing will stop him, except the rain. Very clever. So true of the commitments we break because of the weather. Genuis!
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 10-Dec-2010

Time at my Grandparents' Farm by sweetwoodjax

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Thank you for sharing this memory, and sorry about the theft of your grandmother's quilt. You brought back memories for me, of cow pat pies we threw to see who came out the greenest!
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 10-Dec-2010

Christmas Morning by CodyJack

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This is a great little haiku for the season.
Simple with great imagery.
Makes you want to pull Santa's chair closer to the fire for him.
Nice write
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 10-Dec-2010
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Show Time... by The Stranger

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Bravo!
Brilliant!
I really enjoyed this.
It's true what they say about war. It's old men talking and young men dying.
Nice write.
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 10-Dec-2010

Do You Know Where Your Child Is? by CodyJack
Chapter 21 of the book Where The Rainbow Sleeps ( Grief )

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I enjoyed this. It tugs at the heart. Made me think of the homeless kids in South Africa, and why they run. Nice write.
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 10-Dec-2010

Easily Foreseen by Mark Schardine

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I liked this Haiku. Winter is definately here. Those winds cut through you. Dusk at four-thirty - that's afternoon! I want my days back! Nice write!
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 09-Dec-2010

Sleeping With Poets by joannesnow

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Simply delightful. Thank you. I love the awakening of senses this poem stimulates, because we've all be there. Makes me want to put the laptop down and curl up with a book of poets. Brilliant!
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 09-Dec-2010

Loving In The Moon Light by missy98writer

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This is a brilliant little nonet. I love it. And I agree, you should have entered it into the contest. I loved reading this. Great write. Well done.
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 09-Dec-2010

Collectables by Poetry nerd

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Ouch!
I see you.
I would come round with a feather duster, if it would help.
Keep writing
...I sit frozen in the corner...
Ouch!
Comment Written by jennyrambling on 09-Dec-2010


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