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The Strike by sandramitchell
Chapter 9 of the book Share a Story in a Poem

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A poignantly touching tale of times since passed, but really, on some levels we have not strived past this. The overall read of this poem is excellent. The reader is held captive throughout wondering how this powerful story is going to end. The balance of the stanzas are consistent adding to the flow of the read. Imagery abounds and is quite profound in what is brought to mind. Very well written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 05-Jul-2014

Me and My Travels by Nosha17

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Certainly the tongue-in-cheek tone came through in the write. Quite a jaunt you take the reader on to many a foreign land. The imagery is creative and the words are clever. Very original, amusing, just an overall pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing your journey's with us.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 05-Jul-2014

Heaven Wins by Charlene0513

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Profound in the essence, the faith flows from the words that are spoken. I found myself with an "Amen" when I finished reading this poem. The overall text is creative and original, the words roll into the reader's mind, the imagery of Heaven above is subtle and poignant. Very well written and a pleasure to read.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 05-Jul-2014

Constant by Jumbo J

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You have captured her grace, beauty and love for life and everything in it so wonderfully. As I read this work I could here the ever present "sigh" from somewhere above. She was a friend and a mentor. The words you have spoken flow freely and from the heart, powerfully and poignantly. The elegance of each stanza, the imagery that is presented leaves the reader breathless. Even if one did not know this amazing woman, they would certainly get to know her through this work. Very well written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 05-Jul-2014

Her Legacy by Irish Rain

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Over the years, a source of inspiration. Never could get enough of Pam's writing. She was the reason I kept coming back. A beautiful work that, simplistic in it's form, speaks volumes about the woman she is. Grace and beauty are only two of the words that come to mind. A touching tribute. Her presence here will be greatly missed. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 01-Jul-2014

Gungalo Pam! by royowen

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I can hear the sigh now as it delicately floats down upon us to touch our souls and let us know she is alright. A reflective poem that captures the beauty of Gungalo's spirit and soul, and her true appreciation of the written word. Imagery is a strong presence in each stanza. The subtlety of the rhyme lends to a very pleasurable read. A touching tribute to a woman who gave so much. I will miss her.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 01-Jul-2014

For the Benefit of Mr. Delight by Kingsland
Chapter 102 of the book A Poets Mind

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Introspective words that meander off the page into the reader's mind. A slow paced work that makes the reader take pause and contemplate the "wisdom" that is being relayed. The couplets are natural not forced giving the read an exceptional tone and quality. Nicely done.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 01-Jul-2014

The Lucky Poet Writes by Glasstruth

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Clear, concise, creatively written, certainly original. Each breath we take is a gift and this poem is a gift of fresh air. Artistically, no need to improve. Technically, the way this work is presented adds the moment of the read and lends to the impact of imagery and emotion that is felt. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 01-Jul-2014

She Surrenders by Maureen's Pen
Chapter 168 of the book Writing Whispers 2014

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Elegant. The imagery that is creating in this short write is simply stunning. The moment is captured and the reader "surrenders" to the words and serenity that is crafted. Beautifully written.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 01-Jul-2014

For Gungalo by ravenblack

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Where the Zephyr winds blow through the cathedral grass
Where the River stones are tossed,
Where the sky is always Cobalt blue,
Our beautiful poet now runs barefoot...
Sigh...

Your poem is an elegant tribute to one of the greatest poets of our time and one of the most endearing souls I have ever had the pleasure to associate with. A touching poem that would surely please Gungalo. Always thinking of her and praying for her family. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written by Fiona Hymn on 30-Jun-2014


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