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My Flag by robyn corum

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Thank you for this poem and great show of patriotism.
So many need to respect the Flag and the real meaning of what is America.
I have lived in other countries for some years and the Pride of being American and returning to the greatness of our Country kept me going in places strange and restrictive, like Russia. Now it is a time we need to all stand up for the Country and the truth of our greatness which lies in our constant attempts to give EVERYONE a chance to be all they can be.
Comment Written by danpald on 25-Nov-2020

One Hundred Gray Crayons by robyn corum

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This is perhaps one of the best poems I have seen written about the times we are living through. Thank you for seeing the reality of life even when many others can only see the bleak. The season is part of the poem and I thought at first it was about the grey of late fall with the loss of leaves and finger bare trees. Instead you write of the grey that is in many hearts seeking the colors to revive with the passing of this stupidity of politics and shut downs that only cause more strife.
Comment Written by danpald on 17-Nov-2020

Honoring Veterans by robyn corum

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Thank you for the poem. Those of us who have served and those who are still serving are remembered today with special celebrations. Also it is good to see the "Political correctness" does not effect your writing. Everyone needs to realize the reality that some terms are gender inclusive shown simply by the context. Too many today are ridiculous in the understanding of the richness of the English language and want to reduce every word by changing the original and specific meaning. With time they make more words but less understandable of the English language.
Comment Written by danpald on 11-Nov-2020

Time for me to Leave Fanstory by Gert sherwood
Chapter 7 of the book Having Fun Revamping Cliches

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For the many poems and tender thoughts you have sent. Have fun collecting the poems and making the books. You have a great gift and a positive life story we have enjoyed reading. Prayers and happiness will follow you as you collect the poems and make more dreams come alive.
Comment Written by danpald on 24-Oct-2020

The Dangers of Unmasking... by robyn corum

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Great poem and commentary.
There are so many who have no respect for decency when it comes to waring clothes properly. The lack of dignity is shown well my your poem and the realty of how ugly they are when they do not ware clothes properly. Even if they have a good figure and slim the reality of not showing parts in public that deserve respect is great. I do like the sun bathers and enjoy the sneak peek at times but it is best on the beach or along side the pool and not in the street and store.
Comment Written by danpald on 09-Jun-2020

Blooming, Blooming! by robyn corum

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Very nice drive to the house. Spring is in the air and all is being renewed. The smell and beauty soon on display along with the feeling of the allergies mounting. Fortunately I do not have any allergies to beauty and will enjoy the spring. I have lately moved back to Missouri and working closer to my dad and family members. Nice apartment but time to enjoy the country when visiting the family will make this move one of the best in my life time.
Comment Written by danpald on 03-Mar-2020

One Small Mistake by robyn corum

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The child looks happy and having fun in the new view of things. Better than being ignored now he can watch the show.
Still it is not the best idea to keep hanging when the wife is soon to be home.
Comment Written by danpald on 03-Mar-2020

The Important Stuff by robyn corum

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This is one of your best poems. It is full of beauty and sound truth that many today do not know. Thanks for all your poems and your bright spirit.
It is always a joy to read your poems and the great tributes you give to others at various times.
Comment Written by danpald on 18-Feb-2020

A Mother's Amazing Love by robyn corum

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Perfect ode to Motherhood. Too many say a woman needs to have work to be fulfilled. They can only be the ones who never raised a family. A woman works more than any man would or could in the care of a family. Great poem and true reality expressed.
Comment Written by danpald on 16-Sep-2019

Eighteen Years by robyn corum

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Well presented on this day of memory. I was in Italy when the Towers went down and we spent the day in prayer and asking God for help. This is a Day to Honor those who have moved the country forward. So many still suffering from this day yet now too many do not know what happened and what it meant to America.
Comment Written by danpald on 11-Sep-2019


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