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The Lovers by Mastery
Chapter 1 of the book The Deceivers

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Hi Bob. Just dropped by to say hi to some special folks like yourself. Great opening. As always, super smoothe descriptive details that move the mood along; like the frogs coming out of the weeds. Great imagery.
I have been busy with my recovery blog, submitting to Page & Spine, and getting my second book out there. Glad to see you are well. Last time I checked in, I think you were having some medical problems. But since you are on your 4th book, I assume things have improved.
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 18-Oct-2020

TheHUMAN Race/The Face of Racism by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Damned if we do and damned if we don't. We are living in a no win environment. Just dropped by to say Hi to a few friends.

I am so fed up with all the B.S. Especially the opposing networks, who think we are all idiots and can't see through their stupid spins. Catch you on face book. Have a good day.
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 18-Oct-2020

Famished Feathered Friends by Joan E.

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Love the alliteration in the title. This just about nails it around my feeders.

How have you been? Just dropped by to say Hi to a few folks. Been busy writing and working. New poetry book came out in April: Kaleidoscope. Been a regular submitter to Page & Spine and trying to keep my recovery blog upated.

I no longer see Spiritual Echo listed, any idea why?
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 18-Oct-2020

Many thoughts... by royowen

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This was moving in so many ways. Tried to choose one favorite line but there were do many. I couldn't limit to just one. Thank you for sharing this gem.
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 02-Feb-2020

(cherita) by Joan E.

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I would love to experience, but since I can't. I appreciate your post and your notes. Guess this answers my question as to whether or not you are still traveling. Lol.
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 16-Aug-2019

My Life's End Journey by Spitfire

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I have no idea how you write about all of these setbacks withsuch serming detachment. I think we are the same age and that in and of
Itself is scarey. Hang in there.


Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 16-Aug-2019

Righteous by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Liked eveything about this. Noticed on facebook you are having some medical issues. Hope all goes well. Saw that you were worried about Prissy. If you would have to be admitted to hosp, don't you have someone you could leave her with?
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 04-Oct-2018

Finding Harmony by Spitfire

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I notice the older I get the more focused I am on others my age, and older, especially at the gym. I am constantly making comparisons, wondering how I am perceived. Do I look that old? Are my shoulders beginning to slope? Do people notice my age spots?
But thankfully, I am not surrounded by it. I can come home and to my safe place. Don't really know how you maintain your sanity

Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 04-Oct-2018

The Perfect Wife and Mother by Spitfire

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This is a reminder that one should always expect the unexpected. No one can ever say never when it comes to the human psyche.. Good job on conde nsing a much bigger story.
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 13-Sep-2018

Mount Mazama's Spirits by Joan E.

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Nice alliteration of (b) in the first one. And equally nice allitration of (c) in second, but the echoing sounds of (l)
and (s) really accent the entire duo.
Comment Written by DALLAS01 on 08-Sep-2018


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