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Our Time of Need! by Mike Stevens

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'there' there Did you want the two there. Cute poem. Like the message. Keep up the good work.
The whole country's gone stark raving insane.
Comment Written by justmarly on 17-Mar-2016

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Chapter 1 of the book From Then and there to Here and Now

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I loved this story. The only thing I hated to know the boy received beatings, but there are better kids today who has been brought up with a rod then those who get what they want and are let go. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written by justmarly on 17-Mar-2016

Florence by Mastery
Chapter 6 of the book Fatal Beauty

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A good story. A cop has a big job and dangerous one as well. Hope the girl is found a live. There are too many people found dead. This story makes me feel I'm there. You are doing a great jon. Like to be able to write as well as you. Thanks for sharing. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 05-Nov-2013

I Ask You by l.raven

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Wow what a wonderful poem. I love it. Jesus wants our attention at all times. He's the maker and provider. He will hear us when we pray. When our hearts ache He knows it. Thank you foir sharing your poem. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 05-Nov-2013

My Troubled Heart by denhagan

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Very lovely poem. So many things can get in our way of each othere causing us to say meana things and do what we are sorry we did. Thank you for sharing your poem. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 05-Nov-2013

Getting Back To God by Righteous Riter

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Very nice poem. We all are found doing this. Prayer and read God's word is what we should never stop doing. God deserves every good thing we do for Him. Thanks for sharing. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 05-Nov-2013

First Things First by Mastery
Chapter 5 of the book Fatal Beauty

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I watched him he wave (ED) his hand over the security pad,
This story is interesting and I hope I can read all the chapters of it. This is always going on kidnapping. Its so a shame for those young girls. Then I like how you're putting love in the story. Thank you for sharing. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 02-Nov-2013

Raven Black by write hand blue

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This is a good poem. Ravens sometimes can be a pest. Their not pretty but I don't think I'd let them suffer. All they want to do is eat. Thanks for sharing JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 02-Nov-2013

Scary Times On Halloween by country ranch writer

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Helloween is silly because it makes kids believe in such horrible stuff. God wouldn't do that to them, but yes to the kids they look for candy. They think it's fun, so be it. Thanks for sharing. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 31-Oct-2013

Cyber Sex by SpoiledWrott10

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This is so funny. I like your picture. Yeah I agree there are those who claim they own so much and its just to hook that girl. Sex on line gosh that's a wreid thing. Thank you for sharing. JM
Comment Written by justmarly on 31-Oct-2013


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