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Postponed Fun by RShipp

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Your poem gave me a smile. Did remember me of my childhood. We had a roof like that and once in a year they took all toys down. We were surpriced what they found.. Love this poem. Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 14-Mar-2020
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No brushmarks... by royowen

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A very well written poem Roy and you are right. Never worry about the future. Worry by the day. World seems to be full of danger at this moment. It makes no sense to worry before things happen, it's in God's hands...
We must have Faith. Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 14-Mar-2020

Today, Tomorrow and Yesterday by Teri7

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Very well written minute poem, Teri. Indeed we have to live at the moment and enjoy it as much as we can. Tomorrow we don't know what to expect
but with Hope, Faith and positive thoughts we try to make the best of every day. Thanks for sharing. Blessings Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 14-Mar-2020

You Lied by BeasPeas
Chapter 5 of the book Either It's Love or It Isn't - II

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Very well written 6 word poem, Marilyn. Not easy to tell a story in so few words, but your message is very clear. When people lie, you can't trust them anymore. Great rhyme!! Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 14-Mar-2020

Escape by BeasPeas
Chapter 6 of the book 'Picture This Poems ~ 2020'

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Great poem, Marilyn and I love the way it rhymes. I like reading a good story. You have your own imagination of characters... When I see a movie of such a story I'm always dissapointed a bit. It's never what I had in mind... Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 08-Mar-2020

Laurier Rose by Dolly'sPoems

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Wonderful poem about the Oleander, Dolly. Nice flow and rhyme. I have an Oleander in my garden and because we had a very soft Winter I can see many buds. You described the Oleander very well and I love your artwork. Love Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 08-Mar-2020

The Praying Mantis by RShipp

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A great poem with a lot of humor. A disfunctional family indeed, because Dad lost his heart and his head. It gave me a big laugh. I did not know this about the praying mantis... Great job!! Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 07-Mar-2020

What happened to equality? by royowen

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Very well written poem, Roy and I love the picture. (I am that little thing on the right side) LOL. The comparing starts at a young age. .. It starts at school. My friend in Tasmania had to wear a school uniform, you could not see who was rich or poor. Everybody was the same.. People are judged on their looks and not on who they really are. Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 07-Mar-2020

The Beautiful Pansy Flower by Teri7

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Wonderful 5-7-5 poem, Teri. Pansy flowers are so bright and colorful, I love them. They really cheer up your life. I look forward to Spring to enjoy the creations of God again. Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 02-Mar-2020

He cares -- deeply... by royowen

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Such a wonderful poem Roy with great flow and rhyme. Yes God loves and cares, but we have to be patient. He decides the moment of change. And it always happens in a way we never expected. He knows the right moment and the right time. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem, Roy!! Fia
Comment Written by Dutchie on 01-Mar-2020


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