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Christmas Eve by Dolly'sPoems

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Hi Dolly! That was a wonderful poem. Great visual imagery for a nice vision of Santa with his reindeer and stock. Nice work.

Merry Christmas
God bless you :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

Love Is a Verb by Darlene Franklin

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That was a wonderful story. Sentimental. Loving. Sincere. I enjoyed reading it. Great morale.

However, I see this is for a contest. It is my understanding fables are animals personified as people. You might have to add in a paragraph at the start about the family or transition and make them a family of mice or foxes or something. Double-check with the contest organizer or committee.

Merry Christmas :)
God bless you :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

Losing Anne by Therese Caron

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Cancer is a difficult to deal with and I am sorry you have to go through this. You wrote a beautiful poem. It is tender and sincere. So it's apparent that you do love your family. Take care of yourself and stay strong. God bless you.

May you make the best holiday memories. Merry Christmastide :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

The three tenors by JudyE

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Great photograph. Well thought out. Clearly written. Nice alliteration with L-S-T words. Good resonance from vowels. Great visual imagery. Nice work

Happy Holidays :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019
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Christmas ritual by emmaysavage

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That was a beautiful poem. Carrying traditions is a nice thing. Good reflection and great idea for rememberance. I bought a trio of glass trees with ornaments. It's ecofriendly. I prefer a real tree outside. I didn't see the little table trees this year only poinsettas. Merry Christmas God bless you :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

Santa's Road Map by Sandra du Plessis

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I wonder how many days it really takes him to deliver toys. There are many time zone around the world. You probably get delivered before me. Nice poem.

Merry Christmas :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

My Christmas Wishes by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 186 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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You're such a little sweetheart. That was nice.

Well, Sandra... I wish you the best of the holiday season. May you make plenty wonderful memories from fun times with friends, family and everything you do. God bless you. Merry Christmastide. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

Christmas Eve morning by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 185 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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It's midnight and officially Christmas. The calendar claims a new moon, but I didn't peek out the window. Christmas Eve was nothing to brag about for me. I was just at home. I didn't find pumpkin or chestnuts, but bought a small cheese platter at the grocery store.

I liked your poem. Good alliteration with morning-may. Nice work.

Merry Christmas
God bless you :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019

What Happened by country ranch writer

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New stock is a great reason to enter the rodeo. Great story.

I found out yesterday about an animal called Yak. Yak stew, yak burgers... Recipes are few but similar to beef. They have ranches in Colorado for them. They're so yucky looking as part buffalo and cow. I think the animal is originally from Siberia or something. You have to look at google images of it.

Merry Christmas :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019
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A man is subject... by royowen

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Hiyah Roy! Jesus is partially the reason for the season. And God does keep us on our feet with those seasonal changes. I heard it's beach weather in Australia. Bathing in the ocean on Christmas would be great. Okay, nice poem. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Spiritual visual imagery. Lovely. Merry Christmastide. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment Written by sunnilicious on 25-Dec-2019


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