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Never Ghosts by dragonpoet

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well said about remembering what happened. However, grammar and spacingand spelling need to be corrected. in last verse, especially. souls, lives, need, prayers, forever. I would also add something about the dust that day to make it more vivid
Comment Written by writerwish on 11-Sep-2020

Into the unknown. by John bailey

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Sounds like a bad heart attack and well said. Putting this in present tense and first person made this all more real. Wish though there was more about the destination.
Comment Written by writerwish on 11-Sep-2020

Which One? by pharp

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This is too funny. Yes I'M always getting either disqualified or absolutely NO votes. These poem things make me crazy. Nice poem here.
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016
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An Apple a Day by Dean Kuch

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I have never heard this song before. I can't wait to show it to my grandchildren. It's so catchy. I love the pics and poem. Why isn't she a good apple?
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016
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Time Warp by Cogitator

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Cute and I like the pic too. I remember when my kid used to ask me when is tomorrow and how come it's always today and not yesterday. Hard thing to explain to a 4 year old. Nice poem.
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016
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Sarah's walk home by judester

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Awful but true. Children do learn from examples. It's not what we say ,but what we do. Nice story to show how true this is.
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016
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Weenies by heisemg

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Nice post. And how I do remember when my daughters had questions like this. The vet thing makes sense now. Very well done.
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016
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The Shoes That Didn't Fit by June Sargent

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Excellent entry. It is childlike and consistent. I found no mistakes. I like the part at the end where she didn'the want to wear them anyways..
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016
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Life's Dignity by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 10 of the book World As I See It 6

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What a great poem. You are so good at rhyming. Did you take Classes? Only suggestions: I think there should be capitals in the third rows. No?
Country's instead of countries.
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016

Sloppy Kisses by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 77 of the book Love Parts 2

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Love this poem. I also enjoy rhymes. So romantic and fun. Such a pick me up from the doldrums of life. Great job. Keep it up.
Comment Written by writerwish on 14-Dec-2016


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