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ScarletClearwater

Secrets by October21
Chapter 30 of the book Selected

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Much better with this piece. THe descriptions are better. THe prose is more put together and the dialodue is clear now. I can tell who's talking. I loved it. The plot thickens.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Don't just sit there by barkingdog
Chapter 1 of the book And What do You Think?

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I like the thought of holding onto the rage. I am rageful about this. I cried for two days and I didn't know these people. I am so involved emotionally here. Something needs to be done. We can't just sit by. Thank you for this post.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Personalities on Parade by Spitfire

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It looks more like a demon. Ha! Funny short. True too. I love that a fixture can be so important. You really made me think with this piece. It's kind of like my bird feeder. Inanimate but so important because it brings me joy to see my hummingbirds. They're gone for the winter now, but I long for their return.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Assembly Line by Glasstruth

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I liked it. It wanders a bit, but the overall premise is a great one. The picture you posted was powerful too. Nice work. Happy holidays to you!
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Christmas by AlexisPapaelias

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Pretty and cute. Nice and neat. Liked this simple treat. I wish you luck in the contest. It is a nice thought and good imagery.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

My Bane by steevie

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I really liked this piece. It didn't feel forced or awkward like some rhymes do. Fabulous work with rhyme and flow and sending a great message.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Lot 's Daughters by Spitfire
Chapter 9 of the book Biblical Bytes

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Is this like a new little book of bytes? It's so much fun I love it. Great job again here with your short. It was a fun read and a little disturbing. He he.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Silver and Sapphires by Tonulak

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It slept with shards of poetry - loved this line and the repetition of holding up the mirror. A lovely write, my dear. Kudos for a beautiful work.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Redemption Road Part III by forestport12

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This piece is gripping due to great descriptions. You tell this tale well and vividly. I love the imagery and the believeable dialogue. Great work. Professionally penned.
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012

Waking the Fate by hollyinvesuvianite

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This is a really cool read. I love the songs lately. Nice work. I can hear them almost. I loved the message here. Very important piece of art. Nice presentation as well. Your dear friend, Scar~
Comment Written by ScarletClearwater on 16-Dec-2012


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