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Football Chapter 12 part 2 by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 25 of the book Football - A Novel

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As an African American man who entered the world of data processing at a time when there were not many working. I suffered some unfair practices of those who resented having to compete with me for promotions and raises. I also saw some of the same resentment arise when more and more women entered the business as competitors for positions of leadership. It is shameful, but not as prevalent today as it was back in the early seventies.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Yesterday's Bride by RGstar

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Reading this powerful anitd what had to be most painful write, touche me deeply. I too cannot stand to witness abuse. When I was a mere child of around four years old, my two sisters and I witnessed man murder his wife right before our eyes. When I was a skinny little kid of thirteen years stood up to my abusive step father who was massively bigger than me, but I stopped him from abusing my mother and she put him out shortly after that. My mother is also deceased now, from natural causes of aging. Your poem is awesomely good, very touching.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Firm Conclusions - 1925 by Pantygynt
Chapter 22 of the book More Grist to the Mill

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The conclusions arrived at during this chapter are monumental. Having the advantage of seeing much of what he spoke of already take place. We can see the wisdom of his futuristic predictions. This so far, is a story with powerful issues being discussed and highlighted. I am a solid fan, and I eagerly await the next set of developments.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

I Couldn't Reach Or Touch Her by Miss Cookie Atkinson
Chapter 25 of the book Word and thoughts

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The best way to deal with those who trouble our spirit is to do just what the Bible says we should. if your enemy is hungry, give them something to eat. If your enemy is thirsty, give them water to drink. If your enemy is hurt, bind up their wounds. Doing this gives you a good standing with God and brings down burning coals upon the head of those who hate you.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Three Feet of Snow by Bill Schott

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I hope this does not hurt your feelings, but I saw this coming from at least a mile away. Knowing you and the way your mind operates, I just knew what the eventual outcome was going to be. This is not to say that I did not enjoy it. In fact I enjoyed it all the way. I would have been disappointed if it had happened any other way.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

What It Takes by Raul1

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So true. Patience and perseverance are key elements that contribute to one's success. If you do not have it, you will probably not make it very far. I think that anyone who has been writing for a tear or more probably already knows this.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Flea by Bill Schott

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Eww! Stomp on his head, stomp on him until he is dead. Keep him far away from me, his ugly face I do not want to see. He is a bother, he is a pest. Destroy him and his family along with their nest.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Excuse me! by Miss Cookie Atkinson
Chapter 34 of the book Different Stories To Make You smile

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You did well not to let your disappointment show. As you said, it is much more the thought than the actual gift that matters the most. Never forget the greatest gift that anyone could ever receive is the gift of God's love and that of his son Jesus Christ, who gave his life for four salvation.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Hello They Call Me Mister Fine by Miss Cookie Atkinson
Chapter 12 of the book challenge works

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Ia it not interesting how the actions of some men closely mirror the actions of certain animals. Men who are frisky with the ladies, who do not allow themselves to get tied down in a serious or permanent relationship, are often referred to as dogs or Tom cats. Nice poem.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 07-Mar-2021

Zoo Murder: Believe It or Not by Bill Schott
Chapter 10 of the book Zoo Murder:

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Very tidy. You know of course that there are many who believe that a friendly relationship between law enforcement and the judiciary should not exist. some believe that they can receive no justice when expediency takes the day as described in this amusing tale.
Comment Written by nomi338 on 04-Mar-2021


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