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the mountain by shelley kaye
Chapter 8 of the book 2020

Excellent

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The journey and the things encountered along the way is often more interesting and memorable that the final destination. The things we see and touch, the things that touch and affect us as we journey can be life changing. So, my suggestion is that we all must out of necessity go on a trip.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 05-Apr-2020

Boys in the Night by Bill Schott

Excellent

Whoa. It is becoming quite clear to me that you are on one. Tell me, have you adjusted your medication? Readingyou is like going on a magical adventure, one has no clue where he will end up. Along the way, he will encounter some surprising sights and sounds. One might even experience a bit of nausea, "choke it back son." At the end of the day, you will wiser and just maybe a little sad, but you will not soon forget it. From one who likes you and thinks pretty highly of you, I will say in a voice I usually reserve for my closest friends: "Man you are crazy as hell!" and I mean that in a nice way.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 05-Apr-2020

Not In The Mood by Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

It os in the plans of our Dear Heavenly Father, that the earth will always have people on it. He did not create the earth for nothing. Think about this, It is clearly understood that God loved mankind so much that he allowed his only begotten son to come to the earth, live as a human being, then surrender his precious life on behalf of mankind. Now does that sound like someone that would allow anything Virus, nuclear bomb or out of his mind dictator to destroy us. As was illustrated in the Bible, God and some of his dedicated servants with the aid of his holy spirit were able to resurrect the dead. THe scriptures say that the day will come when many of those lying dead in the grave will be resurrected to eternal life, some in heaven and some here on the earth.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 05-Apr-2020

lake dream by shelley kaye
Chapter 7 of the book 2020

Excellent

Wow. I can imagine that would be more than a little bit disconcerting. It is certainly an experience I hope to never have. It shook me when I really got into what it would probably feel like.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 04-Apr-2020

in my room by shelley kaye
Chapter 6 of the book 2020

Excellent

A writer who is surrounded by things familiar and comforting, may very well create a masterpiece. The lack of debilitating tension is or at least should be conducive to producing good work.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 04-Apr-2020

To A Hero ! by Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

How terribly sad that most of our heroes are created upon a field of battle, many times resulting in the death of said hero. How nice it would be if our very next hero was created by his or her leading the battle to eradicate hatred and conflict, want or need. I join you n saluting a man bigger than his reputation. A man who obviously remembers those who served before, behind, and beside him on the field of battle.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 03-Apr-2020

King Wise by Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

In the opening lines of the "Our Father" prayer the words "Let your name be sanctified" NWT or "Let your name be blessed" KJV. There is clear evidence that the writers of the Bible revered and honored God's name. Your poem, though written as jest, further points out the power in God's name and the wisdom in using it or expressing it.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 03-Apr-2020

A Salute! by Tootie

Excellent

As a former US Airman, 1960-1964. I am always thrilled to learn of a fellow 'flyboy' being honored for anything instead of being vilified for not being as tough as those who join the Army, the Navy or the Marine Corps. While awaiting being sworn in to the Army, I switched my choice to the Air Force and have not regretted my decision for one single moment. Congratulations to Airman Bill Bishop. Sir, I salute you. I know, "Don't call you Sir, because you work for a living," I know

Comment Written by nomi338 on 02-Apr-2020

hidden within the walls by shelley kaye
Chapter 5 of the book 2020

Excellent

The place where we spent our youth will always hold the memories created by all the things we experienced. Good or bad, makes us who we ultimately become. If we turnout good, all who care about us are benefited, if we turn out bad, all who know us will probably suffer. That is just the way it is.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 02-Apr-2020

This river flows... by royowen

Excellent

Awesome words. There are those who believe that most of whom have died or will die on earth will reside in heaven. I do not subscribe to this belief. The scriptures do not lie, they say that there will be life on earth, which was God's initial intent and it has not changed. The main reason that the anointed class of humans who will reside in heaven with Jesus is they will act as judges and co-priests with him. They are qualified because, having once been human themselves, they know the human condition betteh than anyone who has never been human.

Comment Written by nomi338 on 01-Apr-2020