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The Last Dance by Maureen's Pen
Chapter 45 of the book Writing Whispers 2014

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This is a nice sensual, colorful and descriptive poem, written in the free verse style, describing the Tango dance. Nice picture and video to accompany your poem.
Comment Written by denhagan on 15-Feb-2014

Poetry's Potential by rama devi

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This is a nice poem, written in the free verse style. Interesting take of describing poets and their work. Nice picture to accompany the poem.
Comment Written by denhagan on 15-Feb-2014

Push and Pull by Treischel
Chapter 72 of the book Family

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This is a beautiful Spenserian Sonnet poem that gives us a personal glimpse into a trying time in your life. Written in iambic pentameter with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Great picture. Glad you came through okay.
Comment Written by denhagan on 05-Jan-2014

At the Cloister by rhonny

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This is a nice poem about taking a walk in a monastery garden cloister. Written with stanzas of five lines each with good rhythm and rhyming.
Comment Written by denhagan on 01-Jan-2014

Angels by buzclick

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This is a nice romantic love poem, written in the free verse style in tercets with good rhythm throughout the poem. Could have used a picture to compliment your poem.
Comment Written by denhagan on 29-Dec-2013
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Enchanted Forest by RodG

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This is a nice Lune poem for the contest about winter scenery. Has the correct syllable count for each line. Beautiful winter picture to compliment your poem.
Comment Written by denhagan on 29-Dec-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

lune (waving farewell) by rjuselius

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This is a nice Lune poem for the contest about a woman waving farewell with her eyes. Has the correct syllable count for each line.
Comment Written by denhagan on 29-Dec-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Pregnant by DALLAS01

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This is a nice Lune Poem for the contest which concisely describes how mom gets pregnant. Has the correct syllable count for each line.
Comment Written by denhagan on 29-Dec-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Syllable by Azra Rahman Manzer

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This is a nice 5-7-5 poem for the contest which discusses Syllable. Has the correct syllable count for each line. Could have used a nice picture to compliment your poem.
Comment Written by denhagan on 29-Dec-2013

Heaven's Blessings by Margaret Snowdon

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This is a nice inspirational and uplifting poem with a message to persevere. Written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem.
Comment Written by denhagan on 29-Dec-2013


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