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Then and Now--Love Over the Years by Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional
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Your story and history of your dad is much like my dad,
I miss him even though he was not perfect. Thank you! We did not know he had the purple heart until his funeral, the love letter is so touching and comforts so many with past and present family.
Comment Written by cbat on 23-Nov-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Drifting Away by tbacha58

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I fully understand the meaning is a little different for each but in the end you cannot deny the children born from such a life. I think about this and to undo the pain may also take away the joy.
Comment Written by cbat on 08-Nov-2018

Ch 3 Pt 1 of HEaOVS by K. R. Ward
Chapter 3 of the book Hurricanes,Emotions,and Other Viole

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I am not expert at judging anything but you kept my interest even with my puppy trying to eat my phone. I envy your smooth way of telling your story.
Comment Written by cbat on 01-Nov-2018

Souffle--So Flat by Jannypan (Jan)

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This was fun and uplifting, it has been so long I had forgotten what good therapy it is to fiddle around with fanstory. I worry that I am not doing things right.
Comment Written by cbat on 30-Oct-2018

Friday by robbme
Chapter 1 of the book No Child Unloved

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Very easy to read, even starting in the middle you held my interest making me eager to know more, I have too little experience to offer advice at this time.
Comment Written by cbat on 30-Oct-2018

To Plead Or Give Up by Tegan1311
Chapter 4 of the book Lost In The Echo

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You ask the right questions to keep me interested in your story.

Also your story seems to be well written, with great descriptions.

You make it feel totally real.

My attention stayed with your story.
Comment Written by cbat on 16-Jul-2015

Time by giraffmang
Chapter 38 of the book Tiny Tales of Terror

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You have a enticing beginning to your short chapter.

It is impossable not to continue following your story.

You also add unexpected events.

Good job!
Comment Written by cbat on 16-Jul-2015

A Daring Date by Curly Girly
Chapter 84 of the book Trapped

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Interesting chapter, your way of telling it shows a reality.

It is so easy when young to find oneself in over their head, pun intended.

You have a good story, i am amazed athow many chapters.
Comment Written by cbat on 16-Jul-2015

The Little Girl in White by Walu Feral
Chapter 32 of the book The One They Call Feral (poetry)

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A beautiful story and one your child will always have of you.

There is so much around us we cannot understand.

Everything you write is great and stirs echos in the reader.
Comment Written by cbat on 16-Jul-2015

Touch by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 109 of the book 2015 Gypsy Gems

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Again fascinating.

slowing down is always good.

I loved the dancing cobra.

Your writing always sparks my interest, I try to use different words but am repeating myself.
Comment Written by cbat on 16-Jul-2015


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