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Confusion by Lulube

Excellent
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"confusion'
This is an ABC poetry contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both were Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 05-Mar-2021

The Battle of the Bulge by Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I can feel the military power with this.
And almost portrayed as a song I can hear the band marching

I can smell the smoke from the theme and imagery and taste the blood from the victims of war.
Thanks Dr Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 02-Mar-2021

Kabuki Geisha by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 53 of the book Renga Two

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This is a very well 5-7-5 regan.
(Rich in Theme and Imagery)
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues

Complete Synopsis:
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 01-Mar-2021

Isolation by LisaMay

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This is a Naani Contest entry.
Rich on Theme and Imagery

It read well and flowed well, with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 01-Mar-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Take Hold by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 70 of the book New Saved

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

If you ever filed my work you know every Sunday.
And, as a latter Day Saint Priest.
With the Church of Jesus Christ.
I write religiously basically honoring Christ for what he has done and how he suffered so.
During my suffering period from 2003 to 2006 each morning I woke up I basically cursed him.
it took a lot to get out of that deep psychotic depression after losing my son and wife.
And then less than 3 months it came back even harder.
that was when I had my suicide attempts in 2006 December 1st.
...
Yes I've come a long long way since then and I've been giving very many gifts and I've also been able to do a few Miracles along the road.
I haven't been able to walk on water yet but that doesn't mean I'm not going to try?
LOL!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
*Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 01-Mar-2021

God's Gentle Whisper by moonsunrise

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"God's Gentle Whisperer"
I like how you connect God who is enormous with something that's vast as the ocean.
And, I can tell you took a lot of effort in writing this.
It was very RICH in Theme and Imagery.
And, it read well and it flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:

The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for this and have a blessed week!
Doctor Ricky 1024
A Latter-Day Saint Priest with the Church of Jesus Christ.
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 25-Feb-2021

Joy in His Work by HarryT

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"Joy and His Work"
Is 5-7-5 poem writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks, Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 25-Feb-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Friend by Mia Twysted

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"Unendless Love"
This is a rhyming contest Entree rich Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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An Honorarium is what I think you had posted here.
Spiritually written talking about the loss of a loved one.
That we never seem to be able to completely realize that to hey are gone?
And, that they await us one day.
Yes, in a better place above!
Filled with...
"Unendless Love"
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1025
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 25-Feb-2021

For Christ's sake by rjuselius

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Monostich, One Line Contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It flowed well and read well, with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly..
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 22-Feb-2021

Blessed Day by Lulube

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This is a 15-syllable rhyming poetry contest entry.
with all these short pieces of poetry there's very little when it comes to reviewing Adjective and Objective Contents.
I had written some haikus but they're not my cup of tea.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1035
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 18-Feb-2021


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