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Covergirl-a true story by Meia (MESAYERS)

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This goes to show you to the extreme when it comes to a woman's need to beautify themselves.
I truly believe beauty skin deep and I see beauty in women that are obese.
I enjoyed this very much and it does need to be brought out more especially not just for models but also for young teenagers who have thoughts that they are obese.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 09-Nov-2020

Love's Currency by karenina

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Remind me to Bruce Willis movie
"Sixth Sense"
I think in nature some animals have that they know and sense when there's a hurricane coming and it's closed or a tsunami or something caterostic.
Thanks for your interesting peace and speak to you later Ricky
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 08-Nov-2020

Tiger Beetles by Dolly'sPoems

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I've always loved at your nature.
Yes, especially the color of the insects and lizards!
I was just wondering if this is the beetle that floats on water?
But anyhow very well done!
And, I think he could outrun The Flash!
Ricky
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 15-Oct-2020

Spanish Fly by Dolly'sPoems

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Nothing wrong on writing on a creature that is so incredibly talented!
I actually enjoyed your author notes just as well.
I've always been fascinated with the color of insects in the detail.
I believe God creates everybody for a specific reason no matter how small.
And obviously this beetle has a really great defense system.
"Spanish Fly"
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 08-Oct-2020

Creation by Becky Kern-Taylor

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This was entitled creation and its rawest form
Well-written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures were perfect.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 04-Oct-2020

Loved So Much by Him by Teri7

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This 5-7-5 Religious Poem praise our Lord and Savior.
Jesus the Christ!
Did you know He knew and died for both me and you?
Crucified, tortured, spat upon.
Beard pulled mocked...
...
Made to carry a heavy Rosewood Cross at Calvary.
Nailed as if a Piece of Hardwood...
So miss understood...
Adorned with a Crown of Thorns upon His Head.
But this Our Little Lord Jesus...
Truly Dead?
Good job Theresa.
As always,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 03-Oct-2020

Pink Elephant Hawk Moth by Dolly'sPoems

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I've always been amazed by nature and butterflies and moths are both equally beautiful.
This is well written and of course you emphasize the word pink in rhyme which made it more powerful accenting the color of your subject.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 30-Sep-2020

He Took It All by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 10 of the book 2020-5

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"He Took It All"
Is a Six Word Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Image.
...
And Barbara, when I think of Christ?
Especially on this Sabbath Sunday.
And, go to my
Latter-Day Saint Church of Jesus Christ.
I go not as a Mormon Priest but as a humble Man.
Yes, in order honor him.
Yes, by taking in the Sacrament.
Yes, which is of course his blood and his body.
Yes, with water and bread.
...
I then think of Jesus on the Rosewood Cross at Calvery.
Yes, Being crucified.
Jesus the Christ
...
Crucified and hung high on a Rosewood Cross at Calvary!
...
Our Jesus Christ!
Adorned with a Crown of thorns upon his head!
But now?
Not this little, Lord baby Jesus.
...
Yes, Your and my Jesus!
But not in his cradle at Bethlehem.
No Little Lord Jesus in HIS BED!
...
And finally on the Sabbath Day when I think of Him.
And, miss of Him below...
Yes, now bleeding the ground Crimson Red.
Amen.
Doctor Ricky 1024
And good luck in your contest!
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 27-Sep-2020

God is Everywhere by Teri7

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"Evidence Of God"
Are we too blind to see?
The Beauty He Hath created?
For You and for me?
"Once I was Blind...
"But Now Eye Can See?"
I do hope this one's the winner!
Good job Terry!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 21-Sep-2020

Haiku (Winds of Rage) by Mia Twysted

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Yes nature isn't most magnificent thing to experience especially the extreme

And 62 I was a very young boy and me and my three brothers were told to go in the hallway and put our hands as we lock them over our head and protect ourselves cuz there was a tornado coming!
Curious me I ran out of the hall up on the kitchen chair looked out the window and saw it right across the street on the other side of the railroad tracks where I would go to play in the woods and the one became three and started dancing together!
I heard later that it ripped off the roof of the church.
I inspected the damage back in the woods and it looked like someone exploded the pine trees!
Good luck with this haku good job!
Ricky
Comment Written by Ricky1024 on 30-Aug-2020


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