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Indecision by another jim

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Absolutely disarming from the picture and totally charming from the 'twist' in your panties 'in the end' lol!
Rhyme, imagination and humor combine to provide a delightful reflection of 'Indecion" rejections outwitting the reader with enticing deflections. lol!

A fun read:) Dan
Comment Written by Dansden on 21-Jul-2011

Love Simply Grows by judy corcoran

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"Love Simply Grows" is such an appropriate message for parents, grandparents and siblings who contribute to the nurture and growth of a baby!:)

A poem that's neither "sappy" or 'crappy" in celebrating "Love Simply Grows" :) dansden
Comment Written by Dansden on 21-Jul-2011

Tiny-Tommy Goes to the Movies by judy corcoran

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The adventures of the 'Tickletoes' describes the loving ways family care for one another- your creative 'story-telling' is such a rhythmic relational jaunt into the hearts and hopes of those who truly care for one another told by one who truly cares for them all. Thank you, judy!:)Dan
Comment Written by Dansden on 17-Jul-2011

Josephine-Ellen Tyler-Tickletoes by judy corcoran

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The most beautiful image in the world is a small child 'beaming'!
When captured through the adoring eyes of an 'aunt';
Not a treasure on earth is as precious as an aunt's scheming,
When proving to a child there's no such word: 'can't'!:)

Thank you for revealing to the human spirit the indomitable and serendipitous hope and joy that 'makes magic' in the hearts and hopes of those who love!:)
An absolutely 'magical moment' of rhyme and reason in the hearts of children everywhere. :) Dan



Comment Written by Dansden on 14-Jul-2011

The Trip to the Zoo by judy corcoran

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What a delightfully charming description of a family outing to see lions and tigers and bears, oh my!:)

Your rhythmic romp through the zoo
helped bring out 'the child' in each one of us,too!
The snorts and giggles and child-like hullabaloo
must have caused a colorful sight as butterflies flew.

Thank you, Judy, for your charming and creative poetry of 'The Trip To The Zoo'.:) Dansden

Comment Written by Dansden on 12-Jul-2011

Christian by CBonner

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It's just a guess, CBonner, but 'Christian' sounds like anyone of my 5 grandsons.:)
What a delightful and charming description of 'life' at that most impervious age- adolescence going on 45.:)

Thank you, CBonner, for this 'happy' and 'hearty' description of Christian! Dansden
Comment Written by Dansden on 06-Jul-2011

Luck by God's Writer
Chapter 50 of the book Odds and ends

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Legacy
Unequaled:
Christ's
Kindness.

What an affirming acrostic , Happy, conveying volumes
in poetic brevity!:) Very enjoyable and enriching!:)
Dansden
Comment Written by Dansden on 06-Jul-2011

Addiction by judy corcoran

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Brilliantly composed and delivered, Judy!:)

What a delightful 'addiction' you have squandered on yourself and your 'enabling' FanStory 'confidantes'.:) It's obvious, even to the casual 'reviewer', that you ARE HOOKED ON 'peroration', a common malady defined by illustrious scholars as 'the thinking woman's disease'.:) Step a way from the computer, Judy. STEP AWAY from your computer with 'baby steps', at first, until your dishes are finished confirming to yourself that you do STILL HAVE have 'some control' over your 'pernicious' ailment that will likely compel your behavior during your terrestrial journey here with us. Your friends, your 'intercession network' will continue to affirm and celebrate your sense of self in the midst of the compulsions that drive you- we are here for YOU, Judy!:)

You are a gifted human, Judy, and it is great pleasure to enjoy the wisdom and wit of your 'addiction. Thank you!:)
Dansden
P. S. My Alcohol/Drug/Family Couseling experience, though now retired, is not to be confused with this 'diagnosis'.:)
Comment Written by Dansden on 06-Jul-2011

Wings Of Morning by MissMerri
Chapter 64 of the book Where Memory Walks

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Absolutely elegantly and eloquently enchanting, Miss Merri!

May I inquire if you are a teacher by profession? Your imagery and analogous use of imagination is surpassed only by your remarkably accurate punctuation that allows the reader to 'breath in' your 'new day'.

What a gloriously exciting 'adventure' you write- the adventure of a person's lifetime- to 'fly' in the dreams of another and to trust our very own heart for each new day.

Your use of language is joyously 'free' as you describe embracing each day with a heart filled with grace and gumption. Your affirmation of life is exhilarating and your confirmation of hope is breath-taking- the way each day can open to a new horizon of fact and feeling, of head and heart, of nurture and nature.

Thank you, Merri, for your extraordinary query which catapults the 'Peter Pan fairy' to invite and entice all of us into a new day. :) dansden
Comment Written by Dansden on 04-Jul-2011

Homage by Alan K Pease

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Alan, your tribute to 'mentors' on fanstory is inspiring: filled with a sense of 'reverential' appreciation and your gratitude for their inspiration in writing what inspires and instructs heart and mind of the reader. I concur!:)

With candor and conscience you seem to illustrate how their 'poetry' lifts one above ourselves to ascertain truths, both contemporary and communal that informs and affirms our human spirit.

Thank you, Alan, for your ability to describe what poetry can and does to transcend time- any time, all time, our time.:) Your rhyme scheme seems only surpassed by your keen insight into human nature. Dansden
Comment Written by Dansden on 04-Jul-2011


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