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Mommies Are Confusing by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 142 of the book Mama Said

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A very amusing picture your poem paints through a child's eyes. The rhythm and rhyme is excellent and the dialogue is believable.
Comment Written by smudge on 10-Jan-2018

Epilogue 1 by dmt1967
Chapter 39 of the book AM I HUMAN

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It is rather mixed up and unclear especially for children. The punctuation needs attention. Try to keep it simpler. Two women? Who are you referring to?
Comment Written by smudge on 10-Jan-2018

Just One More Chance by Mystic Angel 7777

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A lovely poem an expression of deep faith in human nature and the ability to be transformed into a better person embracing the light.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018

Knickerless by Dolly'sPoems

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A very amusing Limerick. The rhythm an rhyme is excellent as it has to be in a Limerick to raise a smile. It is well illustrated too!
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018

He Likes It? Hey Mikey! by Dean Kuch

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Not sure about "he's and agrees but it all rhymes well. The rhythm is excellent and it I'd very amusing. The illustrations go perfectly with the posting too.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

I Am Not Yet Dead by Jmf4119

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I agree with you entirely. Age makes you sharper and more experienced and able to live every day to the full. I do enjoy no longer having to cook the turkey etc though.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018

Poetry by rama devi

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A beautifully description of poetry. The art of writing poetry is sometimes only as good as the days musing. Nice to read your writing again my friend.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018

Innocence lost... by royowen

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An excellent 5/7/5 syllable poem about the garden of eden. It is exceptionally well illustrated by the superb artwork. I like it.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018

God knows? by Commando

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A very touching personal poem well related. It is true that so many of our heroes are written on the eternal roll of honor in heaven and live on.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018

Soulmates by Jannypan (Jan)

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An excellent love poem describing how falling in love accentuates the senses. It is very beautifully illustrated by the accompanying art work.
Comment Written by smudge on 09-Jan-2018


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