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A Dream of Mine by Kingsland
Chapter 111 of the book Words

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Hi Kingsland. Cool poem, thanks for the read. A free style poem like this is hard to pull off but I think you did it well. I can feel the emotion of the subject matter, and that is what poetry is all about. Well done. -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 31-Dec-2011

A Place by Betty517

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Hi betty. Good poem, thanks for the read. The rhymes were simple but solid and it has a good flow. I like the creativity - it's refreshing - It's what poetry is supposed to be. Well done. -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 31-Dec-2011

This Time of Year by Cheryl Daphine

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Hi Daph's. Cool poem, thanks for the read - well done... Your rhymes are simple but solid. Good flow and good form. I can feel the emotion and that is what good poetry is all about. Thanks - Joe.
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 31-Dec-2011

Marvel The Magical Mystical Moon by stephybs

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Very cool poem you've written. I like the pace and the smoothness of the words-the flow. Excellent diction - good poems need good words and you have that down pat. Well done, thanks for the read. -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 31-Dec-2011

It's My Life by l.raven

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Good poems need lots of emotion and this poem has lots of emotion. I like it. Simple but clear rhymes. Good flow. Well done, I like it. Keep writing. -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 24-Dec-2011

New Fears by HerozAngel

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Cool poem, I like it. I like how the word "disappears" sounds in the second line. It's dark and fun. Thanks for the read, well done, keep writing!
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 24-Dec-2011

Optimistic Depression by kiwigirl2821

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I love it! Imperfection, Vunerbility, Sincerity, Courgage. These are the things that poets struggle with every time we write. We get bogged down in doubt, strangled by limitations and it makes us fucking crazy. I need to write and read poems like this to remind me to keep writing. Write or die. Well done, Inspiring and cool. -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 07-Oct-2011

Senryu (Peace Blockers) by fionageorge

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This is a great senryu, well done!.
It's insightful, clever and absolutely true. Good form and content.
I like -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 16-Sep-2011
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Muddied Waters by c_lucas

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Hi C, Well done on the poem - I like it. Is this a Senryu? You have good style and eye for poetic images. Thanks for the read. - Joe.
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 24-Aug-2011

haiku (summer love) by Connie P

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Brilliant. I love this poem. Your a true poet and I get it. I only hope that others appreciate the attention, concentration and diligence that you clearly put into your poem. -Joe
Comment Written by JoeBlue on 16-Aug-2011
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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