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I think you should be angry. I know I would be angry. This hasn't happen to me yet, but it doesn't mean it won't happen. I hope it won't. I wish you luck in getting your money back. I hope you do. I banged my foot good a few months ago, but didn't break any toes. It was painful to walk for a few weeks. I hope your luck improves.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 26-Nov-2014

I NOW HAVE PROOF THAT I'M AN IDIOT by Sasha

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Perhaps you should have cancelled the lesson. I hope you managed to convince Emilio that you didn't think he was a killer or that you were crazy. I think if Emilio was a killer, he wouldn't give he real telephone number or address. The lesson you can learn is watch out how much you drink before a lesson. I thought the story was funny.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 05-Feb-2014

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN, PART FOUR by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 81 of the book Savannah Love

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The characters seemed interesting and the dialogue real. The story about Walker and the pirates was interesting. It was a good thing Walker could defend themselves from the pirates. The reader should know that once someone declares that there is not such thing as ghosts that something will happen.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 05-Feb-2014

The Just Shall Live by Faith by allborn66

Excellent

This poem expresses faith very well. It paints a picture of a faith between man and god. It is a positive picture of faith.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 08-Mar-2013

Three For One by Sasha

Excellent

All three stories are cute. My cat caught a mouse years ago and it didn't know what to do with it. I managed to cover it in a bowl then I put in the field next to me. I like last story about the parachute story the best. She does have a lot of imagination.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 03-Mar-2013

LA LA LA, LA LA LA LA by Sasha

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I'm glad to hear everything went well this week. My refrigerator makes weird noises. Since it's well over twenty years old, I keep worrying that it will explode and stop working. It keeps going, and I cross my fingers and hope it keeps going.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 01-Mar-2013

Chapter six-part two by c_lucas
Chapter 16 of the book AN ORPHAN NAMED JO

Excellent

Caitline is in a lot of trouble. Sean had killed his wife then tried to sell Caitlin. Her life seems to get worth when she catches the attention of a few bad kids. She will need her wits and courage to stay alive.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 01-Mar-2013

We Can Whip This Thing by nor84
Chapter 6 of the book After the Reich (Working Title)

Excellent

Hans is realizing that he is in a bad situation. His attorney doesn't seem to understand him very well. I think she had more respect for him, by the time he finished explaining what happened. I hope she can help him.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 18-Nov-2012

KEEPING MY LIFE IN PERSPECTIVE by Sasha

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There are many reasons to complain about life. But when you see people who are worse off, it does put your life into perspective. We can't have a perfect life, but we can learn to appreciate what we do have.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 14-Nov-2012

Chapter 11 Part 1 by fictionwriter
Chapter 19 of the book Changing of the Glads

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Zalphia is in a great deal of trouble. I know Platy won't help her. It seems that the people Max works for should have help her before Platy put the implants in Zalphia's body. Now all they can do is wait and see what happens.

Comment Written by Readywriter52 on 12-Nov-2012