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Break In by Patricia Cammish

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This is such a tragic story of a young boy growing up without the support he needed at home. It is also such a sad story of this desperate boy trying to figure things out on his own. Nice writing.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020

Presence by MananaEl

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This is quite clever and fun. Thank you for the smile! Cool clouds in your picture to look at and get lost in, Dang questions to bring us back to the moment to be answered.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020

The Tree of Life

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This is a lovely picture which goes beautifully with your writing. Trees are such a wonderful part of our lives in so many ways. Very nice write for the 5-7-5 contest.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

A Diary Entry By A Teen by Kallie northland

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And, so I wonder what ever happened to this boy-This is sweet and innocent and sad. Fifteen is a tough time. This is good not because it is perfect writing but because it is real. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020

Very Peculiar by Suzanna Ray

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WOW! This is quite a dilema! What a perfect write for this picture. I woould love to know the real story here and if it was a photoshopped picture-fascinating. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020

I'll Fall For You, Rhonnie. by rhonnie69

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This is a cute and clever write and is a tribute to your girlfriend as well as to your relationship. You have a fun way of letting your readers in a bit-nice!
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020

Orange Koi

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This is a creative idea and write for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I enjoyed this - both the picture as well as your words. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Memories

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This is a creative idea and write for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I enjoyed this - both the picture as well as your words. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

To Just Pause

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This is a creative idea and write for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I enjoyed this - both the picture as well as your words. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Fireworks

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This is a creaive idea and write for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I enjoyed this - both the picture as well as your words. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written by equestrik on 04-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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