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Deadly disease by GEETBHIM

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so very true and sad, yes prevention is far better than care just think about all the health factors alone and sick days of the affected,im sure they wished they would backtrack that day.and nice following rules on 5-7-5 poem
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

The Day I Opened My Eyes by ExperiencingLiphe

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very nice and expressive words.
i also equally enjoyed your notes it gave the backdrop to why you were feeling this way.
great job and also as a sidebar happy travels on your continued road of recovery. :)
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

Baby Turtle Taffy by Denise S

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nice clear cute and poetic message about recycling. i enjoyed the sympathy part of your message it engaged your readers to know more about recycing and it's importance also about the effects on the turtles.
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

My Beauty by Crycci
Chapter 4 of the book Celestine Creations

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nice clear verbal expressions.
i enjoyed it, great details.
gives off the illusion of a love lost but the memories still hold dear. nice
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

The Engagement by Rose Hearth

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oh wow! felt such despair and pain while reading this short poetic tale.
sad to say but thats how most women live from day to day depending and relying on others and losing a sense of self all at the same time...wow, gret read and great job for pulling out sympathy of your readers. nice work
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

Who Cares? by Lois Delaney

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ok, i think i have your message igured out see at first i was simply thinking some distraught circumstance caused it to be then i read until the end a lover of animals you are -their beloved friend- and when told all you knew about your sorrow inside they made you think your feelings you should hide...smiles.. nice read and very expressive with your words (paragraph 3- was a little if-ey)
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

The tsunami by virgos43

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very descriptive and powerful message
it had your readers for a moment even though one could only imagine, it gave them a sense of sympathy and allowed them to experience the visual along with your flow of words. nicely written
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

Spring by easyeverett

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very well written and very descriptive with your words
the picture also gave the readers a mental image of all the beauty told in the garden of nature and truly admiring the beauty of it all. very nice and smooth read and you accurately stayed on target with poetic flow
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

Happy Togrther by Alixia

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together is mis spelled
and the color of the font is blended into the box color and your readers can not be abe to read your poem. revise so i can view again to accurately determine your stars
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011

Better Day's Gone by oNray

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this was a very interesting read. it allowed it's readers to drift into the mind of the aging generation. now i see clearly on why my gramdfather refuses to stop driving,smiles...it's a young man's dream and a definition of the male ego..cute.


there was a mis-spell in shining, and last paragraph,2nd sentence (ain't)
Comment Written by nlisah on 04-Oct-2011


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