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Cindy Warren

Dodging Trouble by Mistydawn
Chapter 11 of the book Justice Best Served Cold

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I guess they have to let Carl go. They don't believe him, but they don't have enough to hold him. Nothing seems to be going right. When Carl doesn't return with Manny, that teenager is going to be in trouble. In your second paragraph, is the window bared or barred? I'm guessing it's barred.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 30-Mar-2020

Why... by MARIANNE GIANNO

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That's so sad. Some people just will not stick around, no matter what. I can't imagine why she left the second time. I don't think she knew why herself. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 29-Mar-2020

Og and Ugg ~ The Attack, Part 1 by Sally Law

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Oh, I hope Ugg can teach people to use those slingshots quickly. They might be safe for now, but they'll have to help their neighbors. This is getting exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 29-Mar-2020

The Fisherman's Son-Fifty-Five by Ulla
Chapter 55 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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He must have guessed she'd left him something, but the entire estate? That would be a bit of a shock. He'll be able to support Martha now. What a stroke of luck.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 29-Mar-2020

The Aqua-Beings Want Answers by sandramitchell
Chapter 7 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4

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Maybe there is an empty planet with plenty of water, and maybe the modern-day aliens can find it. I don't imagine Eric could do much, but who knows? He's pretty clever.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 29-Mar-2020

Bat-Crap Crazy by humpwhistle

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Ah, some people have even less luck than they have sense. Seems Russ is one of them. Maybe his old buddy should have let Tats teach him a lesson. There might have been a slim chance he'd learn.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 29-Mar-2020

Blood Dipped Roses by Goldilocks304

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I've never seen a one-line horror poem before. You did it. That's totally creepy. And the picture gives me the willies. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 28-Mar-2020

When did that happen by Pearl Edwards

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Poor guy. He's going to have to go shopping. That track suit just won't do He can try on a few hats while he's at it. And perhaps they make girdles for men? Thanks for a fun read.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 28-Mar-2020

Reflection by Ulla

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I think the world will be fine. It's going to be tough for a while, but we're going to get through this. Maybe it will even teach people what is really important.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 28-Mar-2020

Hunger by Ashlyc6

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I'm sorry life has been so difficult for you. I know a few people with the illness, and they struggle. It's really hard to convince one of them not to get any more pets. I can only imagine what the imaginary bugs would be like. Sometimes if I get a real one on me, it feels like it's still there after it's gone. Fortunately, it doesn't last long. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written by Cindy Warren on 28-Mar-2020


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