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the whisper in all things by catch22

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This is a strong entry into the Free Verse Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
My Thought Garden by RYME4U

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This is a strong entry into the Free Verse Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
In the Garden by K. Lorraine

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This is a strong entry into the Free Verse Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
My life is at a loose End by Ekim777

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This is a strong entry into the Free Verse Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Where Deer Run by Debbie Noland

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This is a strong entry into the Free Verse Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Waterfall by Pam (respa)

Excellent
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This is a strong entry into the Free Verse Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Encouragement by Ridley Williams

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You continue to cock my head and wonder wherein comes your depth. This is definitely you but with a flair of freedom I have not seen from you. It pleases me.

Contest requirements filled. Although I don't know why you are not in the final.

I encourage you to jump on that surf board and ride the wild William. It serves you well.

This is excellent.
Comment Written by Lylise on 05-May-2015
Kk by Bill Schott

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Any version of this film just breaks my heart. It is definitely a love story. "awaits beauty and the end" says it very well. Cool presentation. Excellent poem. Very well done.

Lynda
Kong Fan
Comment Written by Lylise on 28-Apr-2015
As Fate Decrees by Ridley Williams

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow! This is wonderful. The meter and rhyme is spot on and your phrasing is impressive. You have evoked sadness here which is not altogether easy to do well. Solid presentation. Good luck in this contest though I think I have just reviewed the winner.
Comment Written by Lylise on 26-Apr-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Operation Scream by Dean Kuch
Prologue of the book Tiny Tales of Terror

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Dearest sick puppy,

I am ignorant of this multi-author book format. Does this mean I can write about peeling off someone's skin, deep frying it and serving it with salsa? A chapter, if you will, in your dysfunctional book from hell?

Please tell me yes.

Lynda
Comment Written by Lylise on 24-Apr-2015
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