Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Asyraf N. Jamsari

Gutted by Brett Matthew West
Chapter 6 of the book Brandon McCann

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A very well written story. I enjoy the idea and the plot development. You did a good job on maintaining the pace of story as well as the suspense. Suitable choice of words. Keep up the good work. Looking forward for the next one.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 04-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Family Discoveries by apky
Chapter 14 of the book SECRET SHADES: REVEALED

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A good story line and well constructed plot. I like the involvement of multiple characters, I feel like they are very well created. Good use of the dialogues as well and nice choice of words too. Keep up the good work. Looking forward for the next one.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 04-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

I'm waiting here for you by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 38 of the book 32. Romantic Poetry (any form)

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Nicely written poem. I could feel the love and the affection throughout, each stanza is well expressed. Good flow and good choice of words. Brilliant choice of instrumental as well. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 04-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Fall Of The Raptor by apky
Chapter 13 of the book Golden Shana: The Capture

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a very well written story. I like the idea and the plot construction. The characters' development are carefully thought. Nice vocabulary and good vocabulary as well. Keep up the good work. Looking forward for the next one
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 04-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Pearls of Love by Gert sherwood

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A nicely written piece. I enjoy the romance and the expression. Nice flow and nice choice of words. Well thought metaphors as well. All the best for the contest. I'm sure it would do well.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 01-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Traveler's Field by tspencer
Chapter 14 of the book Compartmental Lives

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A very well written piece. i am intrigued by the idea and the concept. Good plot development and well expressed characters. The dialogues are neat and complement each other. Good vocabulary as well. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 01-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Void by Faelchu

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A nicely written poem. I enjoy the idea and the interpretation so much. Well thought choice of words and good flow. I like the last two lines, 'like an accursed lover, bound by fear'. I feel like its very well expressed. Good job. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 01-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Logomedicine -- Prostatitis, Part II by Wabigoon

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi there,

What a good piece of writing. I enjoy the idea and the concept that you came out with. I feel like its very authentic and raw. Nice imagination and well told insights. I like how you managed to maintain the pace as well. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 01-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Miraculous Reunion by apky
Chapter 13 of the book SS REVEALED

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A very well written story. I like the idea and the concept. Nice plot development as you managed to maintain the pace of the story so well. I enjoy the dialogues and characters interpretation. Great artwork too. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 01-Aug-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Contentment by Irish Rain

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A great reminiscence. It is always nice to look back and see how far we have blossomed or improvised from time to time. I enjoyed this poem so much, as I felt like I was reading your journey from ten years ago and you saw life at the time. Nicely expressed and well told. All the best for the contest. Have a nice one!
Comment Written by Asyraf N. Jamsari on 30-Jul-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


Page: 1 Next Page



  Contact Us © 2014 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement