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DARE I EAT THAT ? (d-i-e-t) by waggers

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Another very fun and entertaining read with a lot of humor. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I understand weight struggles very well. I wish I had someone to cook for me. It's harder when you need to cook for everyone else while you are trying to lose weight. You forget to count all the calories which you just "taste to test" LOL.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 28-Dec-2013

Walking Boots by waggers
Chapter 6 of the book One Man's View

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Brilliant! I love it. It made me laugh. It is entertaining and kept me interested all the way though. Now I am curious as to what else you have written. Time to check out your portfolio. Thank you for the entertaining me today.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 28-Dec-2013

Apocrypha by DIS-illusioned

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Good writing. Correct spelling, punctuation and grandma. Lacks originality.

The concept is not new. It is good but not original. I have heard it many times before over many years. Therefore you get only four stars for simply repeating what others have said before you. To improve on it you need to write something more original.

eg....

In the end a god is just a backward dog. :-)
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 15-Dec-2013

Aspects of Love and War by Fleedleflump

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Wars will always be on this planet in various forms. Even in times of so called peace, people still fight their own inner wars. Conflicts are part of life. It is the struggle between opposites which tend to destroy each other in the process of living.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 15-Nov-2013

The Death Of Negativity by Righteous Riter

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You're welcome.
I love inspiring people.
It is good to know you have such faith and confidence in me.

Make sure you keep all that negativity under control and keep believing in me.

Rest in peace.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 15-Nov-2013

Up in Flames by Devon Phipps

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I think this poem is very thought provoking.
It makes me ask why does the match consider itself to not be whole when it is on fire?

The fire is its soul and is that which makes it whole. The match is useless and gives no light or warmth to anyone unless it is on fire.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 15-Nov-2013

Regrets by lindalcreel

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For someone who claims not to be a poet you have done a great job. It is very easy to read and flows smoothly. I think most people who live with those kinds of regrets can identify with these words.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 03-Nov-2013

what the *#*? by mfowler

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I like satire and I think it is amusing that you deliberately misspelled words and made the man appear to be an uneducated idiot who's looking for a job which requires an education. I am amazed he can even read the job requirements. LOL Very amusing.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 03-Nov-2013

Death Was Never So Sweet by mfowler

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Very witty and well written. I hope you don't really suffer from diabetes. However, I know those who do get plenty of help to control it these days. I am sure it's departure is very welcomed.
Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 03-Nov-2013

brevette poem (me) by shelley kaye
Prologue of the book i'll be brief

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That sounds great.
Comments ramble on due to being forced to expand on them. Apparently short reviews are not useful.
How many ways do I need to tell you that the brevette is excellent?
Is it more useful to you if I tell you with more words? LOL

Comment Written by Skyangel02 on 02-Nov-2013


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