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That Special Day by jaybird1

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Great rhyming, excellent flow.

The excitement has been built with every line as if things have come to life in front of my eyes.

Overall a very god composition on a very special topic- just like a song !
Comment Written by Merajul on 21-Mar-2019

Moments by Tootie

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Good one, well compiled.

The flow is good and the word selections in the first stanza is too good.

"With no guarantees of our lives beyond our next breath..." has summed up our life so well.



Comment Written by Merajul on 21-Mar-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

E-mail Spam by HealingMuse

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Good one ! I liked your comparison.

Is it part of any contest ?

A very different subject to write a poetry but definitely relevant.

All the best for the contest.
Comment Written by Merajul on 21-Mar-2019

Pearls of Wisdom by Sanku
Chapter 29 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Excellent composition . well complemented by the picture.

Great flow, great word choices and variety in language.

Deep and meaningful.

What else could be a better tribute to Brooke.
Comment Written by Merajul on 21-Mar-2019

Worship by 24chas

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Very simple, straight and to the point- free verse style.

It flows well; it is deep and meaningful.

You have kept the poem free of pic and formatting- any reason?



Comment Written by Merajul on 21-Mar-2019

Valentines day by Colin John

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Great work complemented by a beautiful pictures.
Very natural feelings, you are putting life in your words as you do with the stones.

Keep it up.
Comment Written by Merajul on 20-Mar-2019

Found Alive by ExperiencingLiphe

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I read your author note , I appreciate your feelings for the same. Poor fellow, stay blessed.

You summed it up very well in the poem. The best comes out when you are deep in your emotions and so the poetry has come out so good. God bless.
Comment Written by Merajul on 19-Mar-2019

Did You? by jaybird1

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Very thoughtful , expressing the ultimate truth.
It connects so well with the readers. The icing on the cake are these lines-
When our turn has come to go
and life's joys and woes surcease;
We should then most surely know,
we shall have eternal peace.
Comment Written by Merajul on 19-Mar-2019

An Iconic Mailbox by Pam (respa)

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Excellent composition. After I read the poem, I went through the author note and then once again read your composition which made the poetry look even better.
It is difficult composition to make and you have done all the justice t it.
Comment Written by Merajul on 19-Mar-2019

The Thought by Irish Rain

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I like the type of description in your poetry. Well captured imagery. Overall I found the flow very good. The flowers in the picture have complemented the lines very well and have definitely made the feelings amplify.
Comment Written by Merajul on 19-Mar-2019


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