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Toppling Love by Ricky1024
Chapter 20 of the book "The Gift of Life."

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This was so intense, it was written in such a unique way the reader needed to envision the scene, I did not notice any errors, and would like to hear more.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 12-Aug-2020

When George Floyd Went Down by djsaxon

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This was great, very sad time in american history , and for americans of all races as well. So many people are praying for peace, lets hope it is soon.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 11-Jun-2020

Invasion by sibhus

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I liked it, and I didn't, haha, the reason why I didn't like it was because it is very real to what is happening in the world, I liked it because it was a great little flash fiction piece.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 11-Jun-2020

Glimpse of Heaven by lyenochka

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This was a gorgeous story, I love all the descriptive details about love and light, and the humor, good luck in the contest, I did not notice any errors..
Comment Written by joann r romei on 29-May-2020

End of Life Journey Conclusion by Spitfire
Chapter 21 of the book End of Life's Journey

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I enjoyed this and glad you an d Roberto are friends, I cannot believe clicks, mean girls are still alive and well. I am certain you will have plenty of new short stories to share with us.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 21-May-2020

Dad, You Left Today by Lulube

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This is a beautiful tribute to a good man and father. you were all lucky to have had him in your life, and he had a full life living until 92, that is amazing, he is always with you.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 20-May-2020

End of Life Journey, Part 19 by Spitfire
Chapter 20 of the book End of Life's Journey

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this read fine glad you are coming along, Im not sure about this Roberto guy, to much going on these days to really trust anyone, please be careful and safe,
Comment Written by joann r romei on 15-May-2020

Dinner with the Donners by christianpowers

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Well, Well, Well, some things never change, how have you been ? Glad to see you back on FS... this was a smooth read, looks like the neighbors were cooking up more than dinner.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 15-May-2020

End of Life Journey, Part 18 by Spitfire
Chapter 19 of the book End of Life's Journey

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I feel so bad that you fell and didn't have a caring staff member, I guess they must be immune to things they have witnessed again and again with various patients, yet it would have been caring to have mentioned Frank, after all this is a rough time for you.
Comment Written by joann r romei on 11-May-2020

The Same House? (A) by Ricky1024
Chapter 9 of the book "Heart Spoken Moments"

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this was a very emotional poem /short story, I felt the pain and I can relate in the sadness that humans feel, for one tragic situation or another ,
Comment Written by joann r romei on 30-Apr-2020


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