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What I Would Say To Americans by I am Cat

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How soothing
How wise
How needed
How well written
You shine as a brilliant star in a sew of chaos.
Brilliant with words
brilliant with wisdom.

I really needed to here this in the sea of descent that fill this site.
Hope you are back to your regular routine soon

Be well
Jimmy
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 14-Nov-2016

A Proud Trumpeteer -a rebuttal poem by AnnaLinda

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I am afraid I did take it seriously. I read all his ratings and there was so much hate.
I am so glad you responded as you did. great verse.
Thanks Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 13-Nov-2016

Trumpsville Town by Dean Kuch

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Works great as usual. subject matter sucks. you and so many others spew hate and loathing on this site; its ok for you elites to shove up the nose of the working people in this country and conning the blacks to support your off the wall policies. But as soon as it is not working for you you all whine like a bunch of babies. get a grip and try to support a country that has been there for you. I live in N.J. and have seen signs that say kill republicans. its the same as the crap that you chose put on this site. your attitude is why the old dude got his ass kicked by a bunch of punks in Chicago because he voted for Trump.. This crap did not happen when Obama was elected and the vote was split then. The working people (deplorable's) sucked it up and move on. You challenge others to debate this with verse. that will do nothing but drive the wedge deeper between different points of view. If you wanted the country to do better you would keep your opinion to your self. Hate destroys the hater. Its a poor lesson to teach your boys.
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 13-Nov-2016

senryu (safety pin in place) by Joan E.

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I like this. Makes a great point. these short pomes can be so powerful. I am working hard to learn and understand this form.

Thanks for the write
Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 12-Nov-2016

The boy with the smile by mvbrooks

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This was well written and an easy read. The subject mater was hard to hear. To many bruised people carry open wounds for a lifetime. They cant let go. like they say
in AA "let go let God".
Thanks for a great write
Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 12-Nov-2016

It's Silent Now by Joy Graham

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This is a wonderful read. It flows easy and sets its own cadence. I just read it to my wife and she got goose pimples. Thank you for doing this fine tribute to those that gave it all. "no greater love". Those that whine and protest should be the most thankful.
Thanks Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 12-Nov-2016

Sorrow's Shadow Shifts by Bill O'Bier

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Bill. This is a beautiful verse. It is melodious, enticing and gives the reader a warm glow. I have read it several times and each time it warms my soul. Thanks for such a fine write. good luck in the contest.
Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 12-Nov-2016

The Letter by djsaxon

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I weep as I read. I hope the whining folks of today know what price was paid for there freedom to Whine. This got me. An excellant write; easy to read and no stumbles along the way.
Thanks Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 12-Nov-2016

Brave Boys of Normandy by Dean Kuch

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Man! can you write. This read smooth as silk and told the story well.
This gave me goose pimples and bought a tear to my eye. So few of the crying youth know why they are aloud to wine. I wonder if the progressives that control what the kids are taught even bother to teach about the brave youth, of the forties, that gave so much. They should march in the Arlington square mile of graves rather than the streets of our cities. Your work evokes such deep thought. You are truly blessed.
Thanks for the write Jax
Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 11-Nov-2016

The Crickets Drone by I am Cat

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Hay Cat hope all is well. I am trying to get back in the grove. this is great as always. I am in awe of your talents... I gave a crack

Just stand up tall get off your knees
Stick out your chest and don't say please
With fears well rapped so very tight
Just throw them out this very night
Answers cleansed your aching heart now your eyes are new
Longings gone your mind is clear and now your ready to
Just stand up tall

I see you have not posted since the 19th hope all is well
Jimmy

Comment Written by Jaxpoet on 10-Nov-2016


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