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The Knot Hole by Suzanna Ray

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Suzanna,

You did an outstanding job in the penning of this faith poem. Your message is very clear, for God is all knowing and He cares so much for all of mankind. It gives me joy just to look towards Heaven and image God looking back at me. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest.

Blessings...
Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 20-Jul-2020

Tomcat and Mamacat talk by Teri7

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Teri,

This is a great entry for the Dialogue only writing prompt.

I enjoyed the conversation between Mama cat and Tom cat. I had to chuckle about the staying six feet away. This was a delightful and most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing, the very best to you in the contest.

Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 20-Jul-2020

Watch Where You Walk! by lyenochka

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Helen,

I do believe you met this tongue twister challenge. It was twisting my mind and tongue as I read it. It was a fun and a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 20-Jul-2020

Student Nurse by Patty Palmer

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Hello My Friend,

I have not been on the site much lately, but I was glad to read this great post of yours. This story really touched my heart. What a blessing you were to little Evan and his family. You have a very loving and kind heart, this gift that God gave you I am sure have blessed many of your patients. Thanks for sharing this warm and heartfelt read.

Love and Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 20-Jul-2020

God Still Answers Prayers by Teri7

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Teri,

This is such a lovely picture of your handsome son and his beautiful wife. It would be a blessing to have your son to move closer, it is always good to have family near. You and your family are always in my prayers. Thanks for sharing this delightful story.

Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 20-Jul-2020

Word And Thought For July 20 by Miss Cookie Atkinson
Chapter 5 of the book Word and thoughts

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MIss Cookie,

Thanks for sharing this powerful thought for today. You words are true and sends a message that there is power in the name of Jesus, all we have to do is call on His name and He is with us all the time. Thanks for sharing and I will continue to stay on praying ground. Stay safe and well and you are in my prayers.

Love and Hugs­???­???­???
Portia

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Comment Written by pharp on 20-Jul-2020

Mutual Healing by lyenochka

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Helen,

This is a very powerful poem and message for all to read and bow before the Lord and seek forgiveness and to learn how to forgive. If we are truly sincere in our hearts, it is amazing what God can do. He did it for me.
Thanks for sharing a most profound read.

Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 19-Jul-2020

Jesus Christ, the Lord by Teri7

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Teri,

This is another powerful one line poem my dear. I totally agree with you, Jesus is my all and all as I can do nothing without Him. May God continue to bless you as you lift His name up before all men. The very best to you in the contest. Keep writing.

Blessings and hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 19-Jul-2020

Today I Choose by Teri7

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Teri,

I love how you exalt and praise God in all your beautifully written poems. This is another great poem with very few words that is very inspiring showing your love for God. Your author's notes are most insightful, extending an invitation to get to know Him. Keep writing for Jesus.

Hugs­???­???­???
Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 19-Jul-2020

Celebrate Life by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan.

This is a beautifully written swap quatrain. This great poems sends a powerful message, in spite of all that is going on around us, the beauty of God love continues to shine through. By His grace and mercy we continue to survive. Thanks for sharing this uplifting poem, it brighten up my day.

Blessings my Friend
Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 19-Jul-2020


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