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Colorism by Kolbe Brown

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Mystery Poet,

Colorism

This is a powerful message and a most profound read, every word penned is true. I totally agree, all lives matter the color of ones skin should not play a role as to who they are. We are all made in the image of God and we are all the same in His sight. Thanks for sharing a very insightful read, the very best to you in the contest.

Blessings...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 19-Jul-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Timeless Art by Cindy Decker

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Cindy,

This is a great entry for this two line writing prompt. You have met all the requirements using very few words, excellent internal rhymes as well. You are very talented, I can see this as a winner. Thanks for sharing, the very best to you in the contest.

Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 18-Jul-2020

Midnight Musings by Cindy Decker

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Cindy,

This is such a beautiful poem, the rhyming is excellent and I can indeed see the magic in your words. Very clever and poetic and a great tribute to the British poets. The artwork selected is perfect for this great poem. The very best to you in the contest. I pray you are doing well and keeping safe.

Blessings...Portia

Comment Written by pharp on 18-Jul-2020

Neowise by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan,

This is an excellent presentation as well as an outstanding job in the penning of this poem. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. Thanks so much for the very informative author's notes. I learn something new every day. A most enjoyable read.

Blessings...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 18-Jul-2020

Cherry Trees Over Brooklyn by RGstar

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Hello, My Dear Friend,

This is a beautifully penned poem. The beauty of this poem is in the story it tells, you have captured love, peace, joy, sadness, and fond memories of a love lost due to war. Loving memories linger in her heart until they meet again. I love the repeating lines, the audio brought this to life for me. It reads like a beautiful song. You are truly blessed with an amazing gift. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Keep writing...

Blessings My friend
Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 14-Jul-2020

My Love For You by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan,

This is an outstanding presentation, a beautifully penned Rondeau. A very delightful and romantic poem. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. A most enjoyable read, thanks for sharing.

Blessings...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 14-Jul-2020

Diedre, Part 2 by lyenochka
Chapter 10 of the book Widows of Viewmont Estates

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Helen,

This is a great post, I just love all the girls as well as our new addition Diedre. I was all into the card game and the cookies, I forgot all about the chickens. Thanks for sharing another great read.

Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 14-Jul-2020

First Firehouse Pole by lyenochka

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Helen,

It is amazing the history you find and share with us. I learn something new every day. I just assumed there were poles still in the fire departments. Thanks again for a most informative post.

Hugs...Portia
Comment Written by pharp on 14-Jul-2020

Of History and Debt by lyenochka

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Helen,

While I greatly enjoyed this most informative post of History and Debt,
I found your beautifully written poem to be the highlight of my day.
These words touched my heart...

Since Jesus paid all debts of sin
I have no fear of death
The only debt I owe to Him
Is love while I have breath

All Jesus ask of us is our love and it is so easy to do, thanks for making my day with this most enjoyable read.

Love Youğ???ğ???ğ???

Portia


Comment Written by pharp on 14-Jul-2020

He Lives In Me by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dawn,

This is powerful and full of wisdom. This twenty syllable poem should be written on plaques for all to feast upon. Thanks so much for sharing the additional information and scriptures shown in your author's notes. Outstanding job my friend, the very best to you in the contest and this is a winner in my eyes.

Blessings...Portia

Comment Written by pharp on 14-Jul-2020


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