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Bill Schott

Twinkle Explosion by susand3022

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Aside from this cute response, I concur that GE Parson is a dick who thinks his opinion is THE opinion. Bible scholars, as he considers himself, need to be less I'M RIGHT and more IS THAT RIGHT? LET'S TALK.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 23-Feb-2020

Helping the World to See by Debbie Pope

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This six-word poem, Helping the World to See, has the six words in it and suggests that a virtuoso verser can build a ballad or hewn a haiku which can assist a reader in solving a life problem. Let's go then.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 23-Feb-2020

Starlit Dreams by susand3022

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This poem, Starlit Dreams, has a perceivable metric and rhyme scheme and finds the classic lovers searching the starry heavens for answers to their future and fortunes.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 23-Feb-2020

A Quiet Place by JLR

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This free verse, A Quiet Place, exercises some choice words which seem to work together in a self-examining piece designed to explore what one knows about him or herself.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 23-Feb-2020

Beware the Ice by JLR

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This poem, Beware the Fire, set up as explained in notes, brings to two extremes together with unique uses of the chosen vocabulary words which stretch their meaning here.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 23-Feb-2020

That Night by Diana L Crawford

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This romantic poem, That Night, presented in three ABCB-rhymed quatrains, recaptures a memory of a perfect meeting with all senses satisfied and expectations surpassed. Nice.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 23-Feb-2020

AEsir's grief by Auryn Eisley

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This five line poem, AEsir's Grief, has the proper formatting and alludes to a great Norse story that I hadn't heard before. Getting shot with mistletoe is the kiss of death. Neat.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 22-Feb-2020

Sometimes, I Wonder... by Y. M. Roger

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This nonet, Sometimes I Wonder, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and finds that life must stop, just a second, to see if the goal is still the same. Then, forward.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 21-Feb-2020

Murmurations of the Heart by Y. M. Roger

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This five-line poem, Murmurations of the Heart, has the proper formatting and describes the subtle feelings we experience as soothing begins in our souls. Nice.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 21-Feb-2020

Fearful Thoughts by Dolly'sPoems

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This chime operandi, Fearful Thoughts, has the proper formatting and gives a terrific rendering of the angst that we feel for the uncertain climate we live in.
Comment Written by Bill Schott on 21-Feb-2020


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