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With the help of the Holy Spirit by Teri7

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The Holy Spirit (part of the Trinity) does indeed lead us if we allow Him to be part of our lives. To direct and guide us in the ways of the Lord.

Well written.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 24-Oct-2020

Discovery by sammielwf

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Discovery is an excellent 2-4-6-8 poem. Discovery and acceptance in ourselves and others is and should be the simple truth.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 24-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Hope by tfawcus

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Hope is an excellent topic for our day. without hope, I'm not sure we would endure.
Very nice free verse poem with vivid imagery.

Well done Tony,
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 24-Oct-2020

Uninspired by nancy_e_davis
Chapter 16 of the book In My Solitude

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This is a beautiful and yet sad poem Nancy. There is a longing for another time. I can certainly identify with the thoughts of aging and watching others do what we used to do.

Very nicely done.
Blessings and stay well
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 23-Oct-2020

Facing Ourself by jaybird1

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Take a good look yourself is excellent advice along with the last stanza. Putting love and truth on display would be good for us all.
Very well written my friend.

Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 23-Oct-2020

Time for me to Leave Fanstory by Gert sherwood
Chapter 7 of the book Having Fun Revamping Cliches

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I will miss reading your beautiful poetry Gert and I'll miss your encouraging reviews but I'm happy you are publishing them in books for your friends and family to enjoy.

Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 23-Oct-2020

To Live Among The Dead by easyeverett

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I enjoyed your journey with Bob Dylans songs, the dreams, the illusions and the beauty of New Mexico's landscape. They make for a most interesting piece of poetry. Excellent imagery and good use of alliteration.

Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 23-Oct-2020

Skin to Skin by karenina

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Wow Karenina! I was not familiar with the "wrapped refrain form but I think you nailed it.
This is a lovely, romantic and a bit erotic love poem.

Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 23-Oct-2020

A Vampire's Proposal by lancellot

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An unusual love poem of the vampire for his undead queen. Excellent poetic devices throughout - especially the rhyme and alliteration which make a poem flow and a joy to read aloud.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 21-Oct-2020

Lady Africa (a sonnet) by easyeverett
Chapter 10 of the book Cityscapes: The Garden to Gotham

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A beautiful piece of poetry. I loved the language, the lovely sonnet rhyme and meter. The imagery was impressive throughout.

A wonderful piece of art to compliment your work.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written by Jmf4119 on 21-Oct-2020


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