My Comments

Rock Bands And Rocking Chairs by Idamarty

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

How fun! What an interesting look at our R&R idols and the reminder that they grow old too. Solid rhyme scheme with an enjoyable topic makes this a blast to read. Again and again. Thanks for sharing and good luck to you in the contest.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 29-Dec-2012

What a life! by Harbans

Good

Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for sharing your work. I enjoyed the sentiment and the rhyme of the Haiku. You've touched a nerve as procrastination is bad habit of mine. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 29-Dec-2012

Perigore by Lobengula

Excellent

I've been away awhile and I'm happy to see you're work on my message board. I enjoyed this poem and hope it did well in the contest. A question though, is chink an English way of saying link? As I feel link might have fit better there.
Either way a nice piece. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 08-Nov-2012

opposites by Alexander E Poet

Good

Your message is clear despite its length. No wasted words, not a lot of room for other interpretation. I like the tie in that GOD still has something to do with religion.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 24-Aug-2012

Simple by artemis53

Exceptional

It's clear you enjoy the simpilcity in nature and this work defines that very well. Well written and thoughtful and I look forward to reading it through several times. Thank you for sharing such a fine piece of work.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 07-Aug-2012

Extra Extra Read All About It by JeffreyStone

Excellent

Awesome work! What a fabulous short story. Catchy opening, good character definition, humorous narrative. Nice finish.
I enjoyed it completely and I cannot think of a suggestion for improvement. Thanks for sharing.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 07-Aug-2012

lampoon by judy corcoran

Excellent

A fun way to make a valid point. Plus I learned a new word in Branes. I like way this poem reads. Well done and the photo is a good companion for the poem.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 15-Jul-2012

Herne The Hunter by Lobengula

Excellent

Entertaining read. I enjoyed the rhyme thoughout but in the last stanza the cadence seems to get lost. Would it have worked with out the "They Crave?"

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 11-Jul-2012

The Fevered Brow by Lobengula

Excellent

Your timing is excellent and the words ring true as I'm building a short story and continue to overthink the work.
Another fine piece of work Lobengula. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Who's the pic? Is that a young Olivier?

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 06-Jul-2012

Zzzzzzzzzzzzap! by visionary1234

Exceptional

Great work, I could feel the storm raging. If the original is better I'd to read it also, to compare. Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written by Paintitblack on 05-Jul-2012
Read and reviewed with blinders on.