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Becoming a Swan by Carol Hillebrenner

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I'm no sure I understood the first part of this article. Were you hooked together side by side as infants, until your Mother somehow separated you, and if she did, what happened to your twin?
Sounds like that Dr. who came to your town gave you a false hope, as you still had some disfiguredness after he finished. I liked the wheel chair race you started. I am in a wheel chair and challenged another WC person to a race, and she beat me by a half a track, but it was fun and gave he other patients good entertainment.
Comment Written by GE Parson on 28-Feb-2021

The Choice

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Very interest ing poem. It is amazing how time flys past us, when we look back at were we have been an what we have done in our short life time, We try tp project our self ahead to where we want to be and what we want to be, and some times we succeed and sometimes we don't
Comment Written by GE Parson on 28-Feb-2021
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The Choice

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Very interest ing poem. It is amazing how time flys past us, when we look back at were we have been an what we have done in our short life time, We try tp project our self ahead to where we want to be and what we want to be, and some times we succeed and sometimes we don't
Comment Written by GE Parson on 28-Feb-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Mom by equestrik

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I seldom give 6 ratings but this poem touched my
heart. you mentioned things I know you wished you had told your Mom while she was alive, like all of us do. When I turned sixteen, I thought of myself as a tough guy, and tough guys didn't kiss their Moms which I never did the day she died. Now that I am older I see how stupid I was. I have instructed my sons to always hug and kiss their Mom when they come home and when they leave. And any of you punks who might happen to read this, who might think you are too tough to hug and kiss your Mom You will change your
mind when you watch her casket lowerd down in that hole, AKA a grave

Comment Written by GE Parson on 28-Feb-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Revenge for Rufus by Amanda Braswell

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Sorry but I fail to see any point to this. Hemlock?
rat poison? What's the connection? If this poor woman knew hemlock was not safe for her doggy,
she should not have allowed it to roam in her back
yard.
Comment Written by GE Parson on 28-Feb-2021

Light pollution reduction by LittleIrishman

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this is all very interesting, but how many people
do you think gives a hoot - or political govrmnt leaders. I doubt very seriously that anyone in city state or any such position will start shutting off
lights. Anyway thanks for sharing
Comment Written by GE Parson on 28-Feb-2021

The Rock and Me by poetwatch

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Hi there Rock Hound,
I'm not a rock hound, but one time my 12 yr old son was. One day I stopped at a rock hound;s house and bought a rock elephant that I was old each rock came from some country. I paid a good amount of money for it ad with great elation gave it to my son and told him abut the special rocks , He looked it over then gave it back to me ad said, "Dad I could go out into a drive way ad pick up rock like these.

Comment Written by GE Parson on 26-Feb-2021

Slavery in the Americas by lyenochka

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WOW! you have spent a lot of time
researching the subject of slavery. The way slavery is presented in America, one would never know
other countries had slaves and that
all the suffering of slavery was confined to the southern states.
I really really appreciate all the
research hours you have put into this subject. If you don't mind I'd to past & copy this entire article for my files. Rev. J. Howarth
Comment Written by GE Parson on 25-Feb-2021

Show, Grace, Mercy and Kindness by patcelaw

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This is usually true but there are sme hard hearted self sentered people in this world that are takers and not givers. That is why we who are givers n
need to always show others Mercy Kindness and love to everyone we meet.
Comment Written by GE Parson on 25-Feb-2021

The Drifters by seaglass

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My Father-in-law was HO BO at the age of 17. He wrote a book about his travels and many experiences. He was once put on a chain gang, but escaped. He also said the reason he was a drifter
because he waned to see what was on the other sief e hill
Comment Written by GE Parson on 25-Feb-2021


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