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Object Lens by Njorgensen

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A very intriguing and well written poem although I'm not sure who or what this friend is. Your words flow well and it reads effortlessly.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

Lust calling by SimplyK

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I really like this poem. It's is lusty, so to speak, but not overly so. You used great descriptions that I'm sure we can all relate to. Really well done.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

Watch Me As I Go by Njorgensen

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It took me a minute, since it wasn't in the notes, to realize you were using the entire alphabet, one letter in each line. It's a little hard to read, but given the challenge I think you did really well.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

The Little Witch and the Fairy by sandramitchell

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I read another poem from this same contest and it's really great to see writers come up with such different stories for it. The second to last line didn't flow as well as the others, but that might just be me. Other than that, the story was cute and the poem was a great read.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

The Witch Pulled a Switch by rspoet

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This is a really great kids poem. Your words flow well and the story is very amusing. I love how you used the tortoise and the hare. Even though I'm an adult, this poem made me smile. Really well done.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

Just Smile by Louise Michelle

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This is a good poem and certainly addresses a serious issue that many kids face. The last line in the first paragraph didn't quite flow as well for me, but maybe that's just me. I like your approach to the subject and the picture definitely made me smile even before I read the poem.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

Sarah Lost her Mama by pennedup

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This is a very well written poem. Your words flow well and the message is clear and easy to understand. This is certainly a light look at losing someone and that makes it a good way to explain it to children. Really well done.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Baby Louise by Njorgensen

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A good poem and I know it's hard to write something so short. It's cute and the photograph really adds something to make the reader smile.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

What happened to love? by Misrael

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This is a well done poem. The subject matter is something that everyone can relate to. You're right about marriage seeming like it should be blissful but that's not always the way it turns out. Even happy couples fight, but I agree with the lust part at the end. Some people seem to think lust is more important than anything, which it isn't.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015

Growth by Helena Frances

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This is a well written poem. Your words flow well and though the subject matter isn't light or happy, it is really well done. Great job.
Comment Written by Tegan1311 on 16-Mar-2015


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