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Dialog for Dummies by Elizabeth Emerald

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You have a sway with words! I love your avoiding clich├©s like the plague, as well as comma splices. You have taken to this writing thing like a duck to water!

I note you actually reviewed my work as your first paying gig on FS. The piece was "Fan Story Wanderer" and I recognized your gem of a name as I was going through my portfolio.

After I said your name is a gem, I panicked! I have this fear of saying something really stupid when communicating with erudite folk such as yourself, so I went to college on line, AKA Google, to find this gem of a definition of an Emerald:
"Emerald is a gemstone and a variety of the mineral beryl (Be3Al2(SiO3)6) colored green by trace amounts of chromium and sometimes vanadium. Beryl has a hardness of 7.5-8 on the Mohs scale. Most emeralds are highly included, so their toughness (resistance to breakage) is classified as generally poor."

Somehow, I believe you're tougher than the average emerald. :)
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 20-Nov-2020

FLASH Fibbing by Elizabeth Emerald

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Sorry, no sixes, wasted on work inferior to yours I now realize with much regret. Wow, you are a lousy liar! You must practice more. I suggest you practice by writing over the top reviews of all my feeble efforts.
Wait just a minute here...have you been doing that already?

Seriously, this is a funny piece, especially if it's fictitious. And I apologise for criticizing your ability to lie. You are a good liar. Wait, that doesn't sound right. How about you have a real penchant for fiction? yes, that's it!
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 19-Nov-2020

Meet Daisy by Ann Market

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Out of sixes, sorry. This hits home because we have an 11-12 year old Lab who is getting grayer by the moment. He is a rescued dog from the Katrina hurricane. He hails from Texas but he is a Cape Codder now. Story was he was found abandoned on a road as a puppy.

Wonka is a great dog, lots of fun and loves his people but he's slowing down. So your sweet story of the older dog and the kind people who loved him and took him home has special meaning to me. Thanks for writing it! God bless, Dennis





Comment Written by Deniz22 on 19-Nov-2020

Grampa Went to the Doctor by GE Parson

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Well, at least your Doc's directions are easy and inexpensive! Did you hear about the patient who, after taking a bunch of tests, said, "Well, Doc, how do I stand?"

To which the good Doctor replied while scratching his head, "I don't know!
It's a miracle!"

And here's one for your daughter nurse: what's the difference between a doctor and God? Answer: God doesn't think He's a doctor.

By the way, I have a daughter who is also an RN. LOve you brother, keep writing and God bless, YBIC Dennis

Comment Written by Deniz22 on 19-Nov-2020

Where Have All The Turkeys Gone? by Roxanna Andrews

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Big fan of Peanuts here and love your permanent one of Snoopy getting inspired in the middle of the night.

This is very cute and well done, but must admit some apprehension it was going political commentary until I got to the end! ­???
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 18-Nov-2020

Time to come back by Sasha

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YOU ARE STILL THE BEST IN MY BOOK!

A RAMBLE FROM YOU IS WORTH TWO IN A BRAMBLE....

I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THAT MEANS SO USE IT IN YOUR RAMBLE

WHERE IT FITS BETTER!

LOVE YOU GIRL AND PRAY GOD'S BEST FOR YOU!

HOPE YOU COME TO JESUS WHO'S LOVE IS INDESCRIBABLE.

A GREAT PREACHER ONCE LIKENED SOME PEOPLE COMING LATE TO JESUS

AS THE SNAILS THAT GOT ON THE ARK...AT LAST!

YOUR FRIEND, DENNIS
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 17-Nov-2020

Vessels That Bring Him Praise by patcelaw

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Yes, excellent encouragement from God's Word we all need to hear and remember in the tough times.
Thanks and God bless you,hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 15-Nov-2020

Frustrations Frustrate Me by GE Parson

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Yes! Nicely done brother and truth we need to hear again and again, at least I do.

It's good to know the Lord is with us in our trials He allows either to correct or stretch us.

I was amazed to see in the Psalm this gem, in relation to Joseph's imprisonment in Egypt; "whose feet they hurt with fetters"!
So God took note of this discomfort of His dear child and faithful servant.
God bless you and your ministry brother!
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 15-Nov-2020

Beyond All Hope of Repair by Elizabeth Emerald

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Run on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on sentences are back or vocabulary memory banks have been ransacked, ruptured or relieved of duty.
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 15-Nov-2020

Uprooted and Replanted by thaities, Rebecca V.

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Awesome! I call you great and consider it even more now a privilege to have made you smile and chuckle a bit! What a life of service and suffering you have lived and how easy has been my own by comparison.

God bless you, dear sister in Christ.
Comment Written by Deniz22 on 14-Nov-2020


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