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Here's to Vegetarians! by Joan E.

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Here's to short poetry
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Unfortunately fanstory frowns on a brevity of words when reviewing! Did you have condimentless food for your holiday's?
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 07-Dec-2015

Some Moment by Glasstruth

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Is death real or just another level on another plane? I love"heaven's library of souls"...can I check them out and read them? Who is death real to!?
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 03-Dec-2015

Haiku (tadpole ponders 'neath) by Neonewman

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Don't know if it matters or not but only counted 6 syllables in the second line (I know you can do 17 or less but some contests insist on 5-7-5). Love the last line, amphibian zen.
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 24-Nov-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Feelings by honeytree

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I would consider this a brief catalog of feelings. I am not sure if this is considered blank verse or free verse. It is a straight forward list of feelings that we have.
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 14-Nov-2015

Tanka (beachcombers) by Lovinia

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There I am having a good time at the beach hunting for treasure and you go and twist it and make it all romantic like with 2 hearts beating as one. Nice twist!
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 14-Nov-2015

CockyLock by redrocklover

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I like cute rhyming poetry. I guess enough sadness on TV and at work, I don't want child abuse in my poetry (just me). So, I liked your scritchy scritch poem and the rhyme scheme and the flow...I pick you!
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 14-Nov-2015

Fireplace by l.raven

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I hate to do this but there are only 4 syllables in your first line firemen (2) watch (1) flames(1) and I believe it's not the fireplace that is out of control but the fire. Anyway, if you change syllable count (or show me how it's five) I'll change rating. Good luck! All fixed!
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 12-Nov-2015
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Over the Hill by wordspinner314

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Losing your eyesight and losing your hair, you've got to have something to be happy about. The fact that you can write a humorous poem is something to be happy about!
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 12-Nov-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Dying Embers of Autumn by Nosha17

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Alovely poem and beautiful picture! and a new poem form, a triquain. I like it because I like the use of internal rhyme, Oh, I have been to Lake Grasmere, that was such a lovely village and I had a boat trip and saw Wordsworth's house. I like "While Nature stirs, the world demurs..." I live in Southern California so I don't have much winter in my destiny!
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 12-Nov-2015

Out of the Blue by MissMerri

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This was cute and quite enjoyable for a Thursday afternoon. I liked your catch refrain of "out of the blue" and then how you moved on to tell a story of how the woman handled it. I think her taking the money was funny! and I am glad she is in the "pink"!
Comment Written by twinklepoems on 12-Nov-2015


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