The Faery Queen
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Heart on the Page by MissMerri

Excellent
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In my opinion, a stunning poem so deserving of my "Exceptional" rating, but all 6 stars are gone, and I ask that you accept my virtual "Six." I loved it and truly appreciated the ending - beautifully fluid rhyming rhythm, easy and unforced, difficult in a narrative, but obviously, easy for you as an inspired and gifted writer. I am surprised this wasn't a contest entry...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Sleeping Ambrosia by Mrs. KT

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In my opinion, though I do not often rate short works as "Exceptional," reducing a minimal 6 star allotment, this was just too beautiful in its simplicity and tribute to nature to rate less. Verse and image are perfect in presentation and, of course, in compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest for this gorgeous write...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Parsing the Business World by Joan E.

Excellent
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In my opinion, a striking series, describing business acumen in incisive detail, referencing both its creative and demarcating effort - the poetic inference demonstrates this complex nature of successful entities...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Which World is Real by papa55mike

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In my opinion, regardless of the intent, these narratives were and are stunning in both delivery and detail - each tale singular in scope, entirely free from each other and all equally imposing in both story and free verse. Thank you for sharing...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Golfield's Children by gingermo

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In my opinion, though free verse, a lyrically melodic write that flows smoothly and effortlessly throughout the narrative of passing childhood - the references are clear and descriptive and easily framed and identified in context - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this splendid read...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Purple Haze by Jmf4119

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In my opinion, another amazing poem by this gifted and visionary writer, whose words never fail to bring both depiction and essence in clear view - a gorgeous write in the very appropriate royal color of purple, and smoothly flowing in flawless rhyming rhythm - a 10 - best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Horror-vacui by JLR

Excellent
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In my opinion, good one! I believe you succeeded admirably with this one - not only is the word itself obscure, but the meaning as well, replaced by so many in our present day. Best wishes in the contest with this one...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Morning Blues by Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent
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In my opinion, a easily relatable write most face or will face in a lifetime, conforming perfectly with the prompt, in easy free verse movement. Best wishes in the contest with this descriptive event...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Facing Acceptance by jaybird1

Excellent
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In my opinion, though a sad commentary about the ills of life, a worthy tribute to one's beloved in her final days and the conclusive acceptance of what was and will be - plaintive and unforced in its easy rhyme and accepted longing...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020

Dreams Unfold by JLR
Chapter 3 of the book Muses of the Heart

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In my opinion, a striking write in adherence to the form, but I found that the presentation was more memorable for its inference linking science and theology, even briefly, because I believe the two corroborate each other, always- a winning write indeed...
Comment Written by evesayshi on 22-Feb-2020


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