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He gives His gifts... by royowen

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So true . I am surrounded by such beauty all God's handiwork but still I see non believers. How do they contemplate a sunrise a baby being born and not say God?
This is awesomeness and only God can create it
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 25-Jun-2019

Mother Goose by susand3022

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So cute...it made me think of the games we play...duck duck goose...and of course mother goose...great perfect picture too. How do they choose a person?
God bless...little gosling
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 25-Jun-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Time mocks us... by royowen

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I agree. Time mocks. I am in New Zealand visiting family and friends. Usually I live 10,000miles away. My aunty will be 90 next year. Hard to believe. And my mom passed away 26 year s ago. My kids have kids ...what!!!!
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 25-Jun-2019

Cat on the Prowl by Dolly'sPoems

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Cat on the prowl...I can see him in my mind's eye slinking low to the ground then pouncing.
Well done...I liked the senses you describe. I liked shrilling cry
God bless.
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 23-Jun-2019

Squirrels and Cane-Swords by humpwhistle

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This was dare I say 'riveting'. I love how baseball unites even the most desperate subjects. You are a master at conversation. I especially relished...there I go again the no spitting in a hot dog...
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 23-Jun-2019

Struggle For God by elpsog

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Only once must you travel this road.
Doing He will gains endless joy for carrying the load.
....doing His Will
Well penned poem and bear it till the end ...not bare...though we come in and out of life in our birthday suits
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 04-May-2019

A Fate Uncertain (A Sonnet) by LyndaS

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So correct me if I'm wrong...you'll go back in time to stop the guy who got a virus but it would cause you never to have been born....are you going to kill your great granddad? Yikes how sad. And don't forget to post it on YouTube...it could go viral... isn't there a cure? Go back one step further and find that
God bless...sorry I like a happy ending always have
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 04-May-2019

Asunder by 24chas

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This has a true ring of sadness...oh nooo another punnnn I'm sorry I will join a support group for addicted punners. I'm just afraid I'd be in a room all by myself lol
The imagery is saddest of sad
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 04-May-2019

McAfertys Curse by Possummagic

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An umbrella did in a fella?
A brolly. What folly...I do hate those things. I d rather get rained on wet than it funnel off an umbrella in a jet....I knew they were crafted for meanness
Thanks for this warning... hmmm what if they'd used an awning
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 04-May-2019

When is Hot Too Hot? by Sasha

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I can't stand getting too hot. I used to get heat stroke every summer. I lived in New Zealand ..I'd die in Mexico. And to have 99* in the house is crazy
Poor you... try peppermint oil on the nape of your neck...it is so cooling
God bless
Comment Written by kiwijenny on 04-May-2019


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