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A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Alone by justafan

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Hi there Thought this was very deep look into ones soul and heart. As always your words conjuror up memories of times past as well as times of the present. Hope all is well with you Your TK
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 16-Mar-2018

Alert! Emergency! Alert! by Hawaiian Mermaid

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Glad to see your muse coming back. To bad it had to be from a near disaster for your words to flow again. Always have liked your way of dealing with reality. Making words flow has always been one of your many gifts as this works proves it again to be true.
Hugs
TK
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 21-Jan-2018

Words Unsaid by I'mEthereal2

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Words unsaid can say So much and you have done just that. No better words writen than Paul Simon's "WORDS OR SILENCE" You have brought the words so everyone can hear. Keep writing... you can only get better as you have the talent to go a long way
TK
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 13-Feb-2017

Her Shadow Threads The Light by I'mEthereal2

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The words come from the heart Love can have many shadows which you have depicted with great emotion. I like your work and do want to read more so please keep writing !!!!
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 08-Feb-2017

To Be Loved by l.raven

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Very nice words that we all can relate to. maybe not always true but good in thought No matter what this is a great write
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 18-Aug-2016

Jerry and his music by misscookie

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I enjoyed this bouncy verbal painting my dear. The words like his playing were music to my ears kudos for a job well done
Tk
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 17-Aug-2016

Born With Music in His Soul by sandramitchell
Chapter 14 of the book Picture This

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What a nice flowing work Ms Sanda. One can almost hear the notes traveling in the breeze. You sure did bring thid work to life. Thank you tk
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 17-Aug-2016

Reclamation by Bill Schott

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Well Bill this one sure takes a few reads to understand what going on. I wish i was in your mind when you penned this or maybe not lol. It did flow well that's for sure. Have to take another read later when my mind is in a different place. Right now am at the VA waiting to be seen so u know ones state of mind is not exactly made for understanding things lol
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 17-Aug-2016

You Get to Drive Away by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 7 of the book Introducing My Family

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A well deserved six on this one Barb.. You wove or should say a puuuurfect verbal painting with your words. Touched the heart as well as the mind Kudos to a job well done tk
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 17-Aug-2016

Thanatophobia by Mystic Angel 7777

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I really like this phobia prose.Rhymed when needed and flowed as well when not needed ..I thought it very worthy of the BIG OLE "6" for sure
TK
Comment Written by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 17-Aug-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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