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Write me a poem by DR DIP

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Yes you are right, it could be a song from the heart.It is a happy and really loving song and onecan feel the beat of the music which goes with the words. Great work. Lesley.J.M
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014
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For life is a memory by DR DIP

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Oh what a lovely lot of beautiful thoughts and memories.
They tell of sadness,regrets and the destiny of aging,and carry so much of the life that they had then.Lovely .Lesley.J.Mooney.(Dancerwwriter)
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014
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Platypus by mfowler

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This poem is a lovely tale of the animal which does live up Here in the high hills in Mackay Queensland.The picture and description are correct and he is a dear, but strange little animal.They are very hare to find or see.i myself have not seen one but know they are there in the streams in the Range. Lesley.J.Mooney
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014
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I Dreamt a dream by Jim Lorson Sr

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What a wonderful picture so full of life,and it would make a great piece of wall paper.The words are lovely until one wakes up and lo and behold, it is only a dream.WE can all do that.Good work Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014
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Reality by smullins

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So true are all the verses and well spoken. It is a good thing that not a lot of people live in anticipation of being in the Land of Oz, if there are a lot.This was rather funny though said with a warning to all-do not hope for too much in this world or you may be disappointed. I guess there are many who do dream like this. Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014
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Misty Plateau by MercurySeven
Chapter 1 of the book Mapless

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I found this to be a striking set of verses- amazing yet powerful in their content. Gosh what a vision you must have in seeing this place. So many pictures conjured up with every line,--- but a question-second verse-"where reddish soil respires (that carpet levitates with sorrow)" a bit hard to take in and comprehend; and the meaning of the word in the third verse.---step intrepid "opes" a world. Is that the correct word used there or does one have to forget the English language.---Good work..Lesley.J.Mooney(DAncerwriter)
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014

Through the Looking Glass Darkly by DonandVicki

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This could have been a really different poem with its unusual striking picture and a contrast of different thoughts; but the rhythm is a little spoiled by the spelling or typing mistakes--as in and "uaproachable"-----unaproachable.
Good try, Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 08-Feb-2014
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Just a Boy by boxergirl

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A very sensitive picture and A lovely verse from a teacher who seems to care about some of his pupils, which is a rare gift in this day and age. I think it is wonderful that this young boy who cannot read still goes to school.I wonder if anyone has considered there may be something wrong with his eyesight , which is often the case. Probably he does not care for some reason. You are a good person.Lesley.J.M ooney
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 07-Feb-2014
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I remember Dad by GWinterwin
Chapter 43 of the book Just Memories

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This is a beautiful story with tales of his father's life and the way they lived then in the country.Oh what memories he has and will not forget, with a father who was si ck and tired, so I assume he died.There are many old people with memories of the past not forgotten but not written down for their children to read.How sad.Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 07-Feb-2014
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Senorita's Dance by Maureen's Pen
Chapter 57 of the book Writing Whispers 2014

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A sultry poem describing a similar dancer.Nicely coloured phrases bring out the story, an the picture really emphasizes it I glorious colour of the Spanish dance which I love as well.Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter).
Comment Written by dancerwriter on 07-Feb-2014
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