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Remember Me by Sally Law

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You are a very strong person in regard to your talent to be able to help people who are in need of guiding for their situation. I also am a person who has the affection of Alzheimer's. So far my only worry is that when my situation goes worse I will become a burden to my dear wife. I pray evey day that God will call me from the earth.
God bless you,
Ray
Comment Written by elpsog on 14-Jun-2019

Come, Lay Down Your Head by Sally Law

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Sally Law I am rarely a reviewer of other persons works but you asked me to read you poem and I said I would. It is clear that you are lover of the young ones and your poem spoke that clearly. Stay on your path my dear lady. God bless you, Ray
Comment Written by elpsog on 02-May-2019

The Little Rose by Gloria ....

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Well penned poem of sad but beautiful in its story. The Lord my lady has given you a wonderful gift of the scribe of poetry. Now doubt you enjoy work work rhyming as much as I do.
Comment Written by elpsog on 29-Apr-2019

The Value of Life by Sally Law

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My wife and I have known a close story to the one you have spun in that my wife miscarried twice. But God was good to us as after the sad we won five children.
God bless you,
Ray

Comment Written by elpsog on 28-Jan-2019

Love Letter on a Napkin by Sally Law

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My dear lady your pen is much stronger than mine of poetry. I am envy of your ability to write a story of such heart crushing. Have you ever printed any books in your name?
Comment Written by elpsog on 07-Jan-2019

Elohim Speaks by Sally Law

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Sally four stars is my way of saying that a three verse poem is below your ability.
Please do not give my a thumbs down I just think a poem is worthy of more than three lines.
God bless you,
Ray
Comment Written by elpsog on 10-Nov-2018

Hope In A Hopeless World by Sally Law

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Sally this is a very heavy story of a world on the spin down into hell. Yea, there is so much sin chocking mankind. Keep plugging in your writing to awaken at lease a few that will read your work. Pray for the domino effect that by you other good people will begin to do as your are.
God bless you,
Ray
Comment Written by elpsog on 07-Nov-2018

Working the Night Shift by Sally Law

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My dear lovely Dorothy in our days of children baring she gave to me four daughters. Then two years later she said to me the she was pregnant again. My first thought was wow will it be five in a row? Nay, out came Gregory. Now when people ask me if I have any children I reply with pride my children are like a very strong poker hand, five queens and a wild kind jack. Time flies by, the youngest is now thirty four years old.
God bless you sally,
Ray
Comment Written by elpsog on 25-Sep-2018

The Scent of Fear by Sally Law

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Bare with me my dear friend as this is my first try of a review. As a twelve year old boy I was a daily paper deliverer of ten local streets of homes. There were five friendly dogs along my route. Being a dog lover I always carried doggy treats in my pocket. One day two strange boys came upon me and started to beat me up. Then Prince a big black heavy god came to my rescue and sent the two boys running away for their life. Prince came back to me and with his loving big tongue licked all over my face. That day he got an extra measure of doggy treats. Your situation is a horror story which you disclosed so very well.
Comment Written by elpsog on 24-Sep-2018

The Year of the Bully by Sally Law

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As a young boy brought up in the borough of Queens New York City I was street smart with fists quick to fight a opponent if needed. Nay I never did anything against the law and was a Catholic grade school boy. Also I way always shiy of the pretty girls in the friendship crowd. I have no idea Sally of what you went through in your youth. But then You believed in the Jesus above who no doubt sent a guardian angle
To care for you.
Comment Written by elpsog on 18-Sep-2018


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