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Lethargic by Debra White

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Hello there, Dear Debra

Sorry to read that you are a little under the weather, mate.

Nice metaphor, you as a little frog on her little pad. :)

Does the number 'twenty six' mean anything specifically?

Hope you feel better soon, Deb

much love

tracey

Comment Written by trimple on 05-May-2019

Sheldon and Shelly by rosehill (Wendy)

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Hello there, Wendy

Lovely to see you back here again.

Oh, this poem is priceless!

The fabulous photograph is enough to inspire those suffering from the most chronic bout of writer blockage.

Your meter is spot on and your imaginative story-poem is a delight to read.

I particularly enjoyed the last two lines that sum up the love-struck pair.


agreed that despite dwelling hours apart,
if love is afoot, all trails lead to the heart.


Bravo!

I wish all the very best of luck, Wendy.

kind regards

trimple :)
Comment Written by trimple on 02-May-2019

Ine Left Me A Friend by Dutchie

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Good afternoon, Fia

I know you were close to Ine, and it must have been an awful blow when she died.

Life often has a way of opening one door as another closes.



Els was glad [with] [of] my company
Because it was a very long drive
She hardly knew Ine's family
And so she came into my life.


Kind regards

tracey
Comment Written by trimple on 02-May-2019

Glutton for Fun by Beri Bee

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Good morning

Your short poem is delightful, but I wonder what impact the poem has without the picture? Although, I do appreciate that picture poems also have their place in the wordy world :)

I wish you luck in the contest

kind regards

trimple
Comment Written by trimple on 02-May-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Case of Miss STEAK'n Identity by Gloria ....

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Good afternoon, Gloria


These flash fiction stories lend themselves well to a good twist at the end and you have certainly accomplished this with your MistSTEAKen identity. The title is brilliant and carries a lovely double underbelly.

The story was over in a flash, as it read so well and had my laugh at the end. Poor Dears... :)

much love

tracey

Comment Written by trimple on 02-May-2019

Oops! by djsaxon

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Good afternoon, D.J Saxon


The term, Oops, is a word we use when we made a small blunder.

I like the irony used here as we look at this picture of absolute carnage.

This then leads me on to wonder if said poem were not displayed with this photo, would it amount to very much?

I guess this is a situation whereby we thrash out the definition between pure poetry and stamp collecting :)

much love

trimple
Comment Written by trimple on 02-May-2019

The Dragon Lord by Y. M. Roger

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Good morning, Yvette

'A Game of Thrones' -- Your son has taken the title of this series quite literally and created a wonderful piece.

The thought process behind this piece of sculpture 'A fantastic war' -- It's almost an oxymoron.

I like the juxtaposition of the dragon, that's often depicted in games and the use bullets that represent war.


Brilliant.

You must be a very proud mum :)

much love

tracey

p.s. My husband, also an artist, suggests that unless the application of this particular glue was deliberate as I mentioned above, might he not use a different adhesive next time :)
Comment Written by trimple on 02-May-2019

The Witch on the hill by Colin Lowley

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Good evening, Colin

Your poem about this 'witch' is intriguing. In modern times, of course, witches are a little thinner on the ground in Britain as they [apparently] were in the 18th century.

The history of torturing so-called witches in this country is truly terrible.

Your remaining tower, I see, is perched on a hill...
I wonder if it just slid a bit? :)

You have an estate or you live on a housing estate? :)

A pleasure to read, Colin.

kind regards

trimple

Comment Written by trimple on 01-May-2019

Burnt By Our Wild Delight by LisaMay

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Good morning again, Lisa

You have a wonderful way with words and your poem about this hot passionate love affair, feels as if your desires are still there, simmering away on the back burner :)

I particularly enjoyed the following


consumed in a riot of glory
Was it the tear gas
that put out the passion?

I hope that your burnt wings can be easily clipped and repaired :)

much love

tracey
Comment Written by trimple on 01-May-2019

A Cozy Place by BeasPeas
Chapter 30 of the book NaPoWriMo Bookend Monorhymes & Art

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Good afternoon, Marilyn

My, you are a talented woman :)

Did you also design them? It sounds as if you have explored so many different facets of art. The only thing I can 'half do' is calligraphy.

You paint a wonderful visual to accompany the snaps of your glass, cleverly etched in Art Nouveau style.

Those bagels sound delicious :)

Kind regards

tracey
Comment Written by trimple on 01-May-2019


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