As always, I really enjoy your work.
This is a great subject for the ABCD poem.
May I make a couple of small suggestions?
I believe the word is spelled "till", not "til", though I realize it may be different in different countries. I'm in America, so I've been whipped into shape re the spelling of "till".
I want to suggest that you might be able to come up with something more specific in your last line, the final part of it. Does that make sense? Unless, of course, you meant to say "As Time the...".
Also, must tell you how much I love your line, "Snatch at the Roses that die as they fall,". Very nice.
Thanks for sharing. It's always a pleasure to read you work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by shortwerks on 08-Feb-2014