King Wise
An eight line acrostic, humour poem; pl read Author Notes
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A treasured moment by Ben Colder

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Sorry I missed this one. I stay in a fog these days. This is a beautiful tribute to that special moment that warms our hearts and lightens our load. Beautiful words and picture. Best of luck with this winning piece.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 11-Jul-2016

haiku-New generation by Ben Colder

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You just brought a big old smile to this weary face. Milk in jug, indeed. Milking is one thing I never had to do because Granny didn't own a cow when I came along. Best of luck in the contest. Really enjoyed this one.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 15-Jun-2016

Facing reality by Ben Colder

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This has got to be the most beautiful love letter I have read in a long time. I always feel loved ones in the gentle breezes myself. My heart goes out to you and your beautiful family. God has you in His mighty arms. Blessings~
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 11-Jun-2016

God shed a tear for you. by Ben Colder

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Wow, the time and effort you put into this excellent piece is amazing to me. If this does not win the contest I don't know what will. Thank you for all the tributes you give to my gender. I had no idea what all roles the women played into capturing our freedom. This is just beyond excellent, Ben Colder. Wish I had a ten.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 01-Jun-2016

Free verse -Day By Day by Ben Colder

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You are right, it's not good. it is excellent. Tears are in my eyes and I smile at the thought of you two together in heaven one day. She is waiting, patiently, with outstretched arms for her beloved Ben. Blessings, my friend.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 30-May-2016

Little Big Pig by Lisa Deverick

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What a beautifully written and expressed story in a poem. You certainly have a gift for children's poetry. I imagine your grandchildren are very proud of you. This is a winner in my eyes.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 20-May-2016

Dancing Ophelia by catch22

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Beautifully written and expressed. The MC's love shines through in the original, creative piece. All out of sixes, but best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 20-May-2016

A certain spot by Ben Colder

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I think your talent shines now like never before. You write straight from the heart and it is filled with love. Just a beautiful tribute to a life long love. Blessings, Ben Colder.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 20-May-2016

Free Verse. This Morning by Ben Colder

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The tears in my eyes are joyful and real. You write this so beautifully, and leaves me in peace for you. So happy you are writing again. Best of luck, my friend, in your new life, which I am certain will be taken in each step with Jesus. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 20-May-2016

Rose Marie by Margaret Ford

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What a sad but beautifully crafted story within a poem. I can honestly say this one should be a winner. You paint a poignant tale of Rose Marie. I really hate the last part about her grandkids. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by TOMORAL on 20-May-2016


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