Chapter Achtzehn part ein
Chapter 57 of the book Perennials of War
"Anderson scanned the room. "I don't see an elephant. And yes, the dogs are taken care of." (Hahahaha!)
"After licking her lips, she continued, "Drew, I need to leave immediately." (Oh no!)
"No(,) wait. Please don't leave," interjected Shana."
"I can ensure your safety here and I can't if you're elsewhere." (Correct! I agree.)
"So(,) there is a benefit from marrying out of the Jewish faith." (he's gotchya there, girlie!)
"Deuteronomy 7: 3-4 in the Torah forbids intermarriage, for many reasons." Well, on the other hand, maybe not. Lol.)
Another very well written chapter with a couple of educational bits thrown in as well. Also, a very unpredictable chapter as you can probably tell by my babbling above.
Great job and I'm so glad that's the reason she's leaving... sheesh! I'm not doing very well, here, am I? I meant, not because the kid is sick, but, because she's not leaving because he propositioned her.
Fab work, ma'am.
Comment Written by Walu Feral on 17-Dec-2017