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American Sniper by strandregs
Chapter 35 of the book Pitter Patter Crash Humour

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comical picture when considered with your words. I love the way you play with your reader. It's so personal. You are good at that :-)
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 26-May-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

This Small Thing I Ask by strandregs
Chapter 54 of the book Philosophy Of Living

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hey old friend. This six stars are for the smile you bring. It's good to be back reading your writing and trying to play with my own head. I hope things are well for you
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 24-May-2016

Wait Nicely by abbasjoy

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because I have multiple sclerosis, I have prayed many hours without any obvious response from G - D. When I can't wait nicely, sometimes I get angry until I remember to look around at all the small miracles surrounding me. It helps me to wait nicely. Your story is well put
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 20-May-2016

No Returns by L.lora

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good picture with your descriptive poem. This poem captures

romantic times of a range cowboy. I like the colors in your picture and in your words. Good job
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 20-May-2016

My First Broken Promise by thonnigford09

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We hate breaking promises. The action separates us from ourselves and from others. Your home captures this. I found it hard to read on the red background
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 24-Jan-2016

Election Night by Tatarka2

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You tell a good story. I wish it had been more cohesive, I'm not quite sureWhat the election had to do with the rest of the story. I understand it brought you and your sister close after years of misunderstanding. Some explanation of why that was would have been helpful. Good luck, Cindy
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 09-Mar-2014

The Announcement by rwilliam
Chapter 9 of the book Two Worlds- One King

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I like the opening of your story, you set the stage very well. My curiosity is piqued about the war and these four friends. This chapter is a good excerpt and I look forward to reading more. Good job, Cindy
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 09-Mar-2014

Painful Burns by strandregs

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HI! Happy Hannukah. Love the poem,I like your
verse............miss you........................... cindy

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Comment Written by angelmagnet on 29-Nov-2013

The stage is set by virgochild

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A LOVELY ODE TO Michael; somehow in the rhythm of your verse you capture his style and presence- it gave me a moment of nostalgia and sadness simultaneously. GOOD JOB
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 10-Sep-2013

Claudia's Demand by lindalcreel
Chapter 14 of the book Esra's Prophecy

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This promises to be a supernatural story full of intriguing situations. I will certainly return to catch up and stay current on your posts as often as I can.
Comment Written by angelmagnet on 10-Sep-2013


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