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Holding Up a Tree by Treischel
Chapter 144 of the book Family

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Trieschel,
This Boutonniere write is simply but intricately composed sharing a universal knowledge of what little boys are made of. In their minds, they can accomplish anything because they are strong! Too bad that the world tries to prove them wrong.
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Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

~ ~ Swept Away ~ ~ by meeshu

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MEDESHU,
This AABB rhymed write is majestic in word choice and calls the reader to enjoy the wonders of the earth and in relationships. The shot looks like it was taken near New Mexico? Did you take it? Well done.
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Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

Prayer by BermyBye50

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Bermy,
This is another powerful write about what prayer is and is not. I thought these lines were spot on,
for prayer is...
simply a conversation
of the heart with God unscripted
I did get tripped up in what seemed to be double negatives which make something positive in these lines,
an open truthful admission
that is unknowingly falsely misspoken

Is falsely and misspoken the same thing?

Well done, brother. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

Lessons From History by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 149 of the book 33. Spiritual Poetry

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Sandra,
This BALLAD RHYMING POEM meets the requirements of the writing goal. It is clear in its depiction of human nature and proclivity to sin, even after God rescues us. Well phrased. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

Sleeping on Dreams by Vicky Klebs

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This Mono-rhyme writing prompt entry is intriguing and the choice of words follow the other-worldly aspects of the unconscious mind and how it constructs a different reality. Strong end rhyme. All the best in the contest!
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Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

A New Chance by damommy

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DaMommy,

This An Amphion write is powerfully written with clarity of thought and presentation. I particularly enjoyed the mystery of the question posed. Well crafted. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

A Miracle of Miracles by BermyBye50

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Bermy,
This free verse spiritual write is full of sound theology, and expresses well the sacrifice that our Lord so freely made for our sakes. Word choice is a cut above and does not stoop to trite phrases. Well done, brother!
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Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

The Rustle In The Wind-Fifty-Five by Ulla
Chapter 55 of the book The Rustle In The Wind

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Ulla,
This Biographical Non-Fiction installment has naturally flowing dialogue that expresses the feelings of the people clearly and in a moving way. Nicely crafted. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

The Power of the Drug by Pat Fleming

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Hi Pat.
This write is powerfully written to describe the torment of one so entangled in a life-controlling addiction. Few words with great impact. Well done.
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Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019

Kits and Snooping, Part 2 by krprice
Chapter 3 of the book Murder and the Angry Avenger

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KR,
I'm a cat lover primarily and any other animal, at that. I find the dialogue natural and believable, along with the behaviors of the animals. I enjoyed the way you have demonstrated that people should be invested in their fur persons. Well done.
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Comment Written by GracieAnn on 06-Jan-2019


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