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Dorothy Farrell
Double Blind~Chapter Nine by Sally Law
Chapter 9 of the book Double Blind

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Great chapter Sally, along with the bare bones of the story, it's the little stories within the story, the little asides that make your stories so interesting. Faultless presentation, interesting read and that "Oh NO" cliffhanger ending, that cleverly leaves us wanting to know what is coming next. Well done crafty girl. Love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 01-Jun-2020
Ant-Eater's Education by humpwhistle

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Great story Lee. Interesting and would make a great movie. You could get in touch with Disney movies, or whatever they're called. I really enjoyed the cheeky termite conversation with the aardvark. Yet another great one from you. I've said it before, but again I say "I don't know how you keep thinking of them - and, of course, it's the way you tell'em" - Dorothy
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 01-Jun-2020
Disparaging President Trump by Robert Zimmerman

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Hello Robert, these are troubling times. You must know that anyone in power must be aware that they are going to face some flack from the public. You have given your views very clearly here, and well written. You must also have noticed nothing seems to faze your president. Keep writing. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 30-May-2020
Going to the Vet with Muffy by Teri7

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Hello dear Teri, I know how much you love cats and I hope Muffy is improving as I write this review. Cats, just like us can suffer from some of things humans get. Could it be hay-fever? Read about the corona virus. You might find it interesting. With your loving care Muffy will be fine - he looks very peaceful in the picture. Love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 30-May-2020
Kneel On Me by djsaxon

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Hello Jon (is that the name you prefer? LOL!). This is a very well written acrostic on an ugly subject. The policeman who knelt on that poor man's neck has been fired - but that's not enough. He should be in prison for murder. What the hell is going on in this world? Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 30-May-2020
Golden Pheasant by Dolly'sPoems

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Hello Dolly, this is a really very well written sonnet. Your choice of wording is admirable and I agree with you - this bird is a beauty and you do him justice with your artwork - the first I've seen of one of your birds in flight. Very well done. Love Dorothy x
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 30-May-2020
A trophy of grace... by royowen

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Hello Roy, this is a lovely poem in the form of a prayer. A strong opening stanza, demonstrating in your second stanza how God does forgive us our sins no matter what. The whole poem is beautifully written. I wont mention metaphor because I have come to expect these from you in every poem. Beautiful work - no picture and none needed - the poem stands well alone. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 30-May-2020
Foretelling by Sugarray77

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Hello Melissa, this is a really lovely Lune - very cleverly thought out. I love your third line. Great, and very appropriate picture. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 30-May-2020
red tide by catch22

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Hello Catch22, you have told a grim story with so few words of how we are polluting the rivers. I don't know the word algal - do you mean algae - I'm English and maybe it's spelled differently in America? This is a brilliant entry and I wish you well in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 25-May-2020
Twenty Questions ... w/Pringles by humpwhistle

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This is so well written and you make it seem so easy, but I suspect you put a lot of work into this. Never dull, really witty, funny and interesting. I liked 'when pigs master aeronautics.' A good take on 'when pigs fly'? It's hard to say what I particularly liked - I enjoyed it all. Good Luck, regards Dorothy
Comment Written by Dorothy Farrell on 25-May-2020
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